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Postby Megar » August 17th, 2015, 4:08 am

Fine
I honestly shouldn't be putting this out. It really should be the most boring thing you could get out of this game, but I can't really say for sure. I feel like it has its own charm.
I didn't really think of any sort of music while making it, but for what its worth this was playing while I was making the level, hence the name 'Fine'.

Have fun, I guess. Not much to see here.

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Re: Fine

Postby Supershroom » August 17th, 2015, 5:09 am

The only thing which distinguishes this level from a bad portal noob's level is that is has good graphics. It's way too short and contains nothing called gameplay, and you know that.

This could be a really good start for a really good platformer or story level whatsoever. I'm not rating this now, instead I hope you make something cool out of it. Then it could have charm. ;)
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Re: Fine

Postby Pawn12 » August 17th, 2015, 5:24 pm

The level is pleasing to look at, though the vine on that cliff looks really out of place.
This would make a nice looking intro to a level. No rating... for now.
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