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Floor 3:Mirage Island

PostPosted: August 26th, 2015, 7:51 pm
by Goldy301
Mirage Island

Sorry if it's short but what can I do!

Once again I make a level,however it appears to be short.

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Re: Floor 3:Mirage Island

PostPosted: August 26th, 2015, 9:01 pm
by 1018peter
Just wondering,why did you take the same tile combination as Jumbo did in his "Freeze Cube Galaxy"?

Re: Floor 3:Mirage Island

PostPosted: August 26th, 2015, 9:51 pm
by Supershroom
Well, Goldy likes to be very inspired by other levels. I've also found out that a waggon of Ride through the Mines lost itself in this level and during its exodus it lost some lading and also got layered incorrectly (behind the fences).

This has a fairly good gameplay and graphics structure, yet it was a bit too short and it wasn't entirely your very own work, to be honest. Next time maybe come again with something original, or keep being inspired yet don't copy it 1:1. Also three stars.

Re: Floor 3:Mirage Island

PostPosted: August 26th, 2015, 10:19 pm
by Deathsong555
Yeah,he likes to be inspired. I've read book saying if you copy others,it's sometimes bad and good. And said you might someday also gain the *people* whom you copy *their* knowledge. It said there anyway. I won't be rating this cause I'm not interested.

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Re: Floor 3:Mirage Island

PostPosted: August 26th, 2015, 10:39 pm
by 1018peter
You can take inspirations from others,that's fine. But you have to set yourself apart from that source of inspiration,otherwise you'll just look like a knockoff of that source of inspiration.