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Postby Goldy301 » August 31st, 2015, 10:11 pm

After Bittercold
I know this level might be bad on the amount of flying objects. And you might feel angry on playing this since I tested this level a couple of times and end up falling without balancing. You might even crash on a rock when using something.

Here we have a time stopped level, just balance well.
:darrow: Music is there.


Pokemon R/S/E - Abandoned Ship - Remix


Have fun!

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Re: After Bittercold

Postby cliffy987 » September 1st, 2015, 3:21 am

I'm sorry this level just needs a little work. It's a bit too hard and if you remake this level (that would be a great idea) use little islands of grass tiles or something the idea of the level is good though it's supposed to be what it would look like if the bitter cold did destroy every thing in Pokemon mystery dungeon. Or maybe it' something completely different. I rated 2 stars.
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Re: After Bittercold

Postby Supershroom » September 1st, 2015, 5:54 am

I don't think that the theme of a death-landscape level was badly executed; it succeeds at having the according atmosphere. Yet those floating rocks are just ugly. They could be connected with twisted branches, or there could be squizzy blocks instead of them; the main thing is just that their jagged underside shouldn't be visible. Also grass ground thoughtlessly mixed with jungle ground in the middle island is cutoff; the shine sprite is buried into the blocks so it can't be retrieved (playtessst) and the music is a bit too vivid for such a dark stage.

There are essential flaws, yet there is a good amount of platforming with a good amount of difficulty (apart from a tricky pass between transitions). 2.5 --> 3 stars
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1 star: (0 - 5.75 in LDC) These levels need a lot of work. They're totally un-elaborated, and/or inherently flawed due to things like cutoff or enemy spam, or they're untested and there are too many bugs gameplay-wise, in short: Many many things went wrong in such a level.

2 stars: (6 - 9.75) These levels are not terrible, but poor. They're too short, lack scenery or they have errors and/or bugs but it's still barely enjoyable. Again, spend more effort and try to do better. (if it's your first level that I rate two stars, it's not bad. There's a long way you can still go)

3 stars: (10 - 12.75) These levels are about mediocre. They may be still a little bit short, the gameplay is fine but not very original and graphics are also solid, but not breath-taking. Try to keep improving!

4 stars: (13 - 15) These levels are nice, but not the best. Effort has been put into them, there can some professionality be seen in gameplay and graphics, they're a nice experience to play, but there are still things you can do to make it even better. Try to go the extra mile!

5 stars: (15.25 - 20) These are really great levels, those which, as said, I would give more than 15 in an LDC. These suffice many high requirements, and it already goes into subtleties if you want to make them better. These levels are successful all around. Bravo.

These are just general principles I try to follow when rating. Sometimes I don't leave a further comment when rating, most times I do, if you have questions about it, feel free to ask further.
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Re: After Bittercold

Postby Deathsong555 » September 2nd, 2015, 1:11 am

You edited your level. Sorry if haven't noticed earlier. It seems you've added extra things, like the twisted tree, some extra things on the rocks.......but there's still some flaws, the cutoff which is jungle mixed with grass tile, the earthquake which you haven't added arrows to notice you'll fall once you cross the horizontal transition, weird thing is you've added arrows in the part close to the jungle-mixed-with-grass-tile part and not in the tremor part. 4 stars instead of 3. Advice for you: Add more of those things that Supershroom mentioned before posting levels.
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