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Postby JCSII the YOUTUBER » September 13th, 2015, 11:07 am

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Re: Attack Of The RainbowBill 1-1

Postby Jumbo101 » September 15th, 2015, 10:48 am

This level was bad. Although the rainbow bullet bills weren't so bad. But that doesn't make up for the graphics, not to say they're terrible, just try harder next time. Another thing, the level design isn't really that great. Could've used more scenery. And there's also no enemies, that's one of the things that makes a level challenging. Sorry for being so judgemental. But I rate 2/5
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Re: Attack Of The RainbowBill 1-1

Postby JCSII the YOUTUBER » September 24th, 2015, 6:49 pm

K, this was my first level, so that is why it was bad. Just saying, but I will do better next time.
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Re: Attack Of The RainbowBill 1-1

Postby Supershroom » September 24th, 2015, 11:56 pm

That's the spirit. You can't be familiar with many subtleties of the designer at your first time and you have to learn from critique, and your skills will be better. But this first level is quite a good one for being a first level, it shows potential. Although your tiling being monotonous, you've still met good colour choices, just needs more variety. Also there are some cases when I've zoomed out, I've seen the background outside the buildings. The pipe section was very interesting, however you should always put a Warp Pipe Top item at where the flames go out instead of just Base items (since their edges are unfinished), so it looks like a real pipe. Also a checkpoint before the pipes would be nice since you can suffer some deaths here (checkpoint = hidden pipe at the start + sign telling where it is). And, following to what Jumbo said, things like coins, plants, rocks and a few enemies fill your level with life.

I give a 3 stars, and I'm interested to see what you pull off next time.
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2 stars: (6 - 9.75) These levels are not terrible, but poor. They're too short, lack scenery or they have errors and/or bugs but it's still barely enjoyable. Again, spend more effort and try to do better. (if it's your first level that I rate two stars, it's not bad. There's a long way you can still go)

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5 stars: (15.25 - 20) These are really great levels, those which, as said, I would give more than 15 in an LDC. These suffice many high requirements, and it already goes into subtleties if you want to make them better. These levels are successful all around. Bravo.

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