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Shy Guy-Penguin War

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Postby nintendoteen202 » September 13th, 2015, 3:43 pm

Shy Guy-Penguin War
Help the penguins win the war against the Shy Guys!

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Re: Shy Guy-Penguin War

Postby Jumbo101 » September 19th, 2015, 3:51 pm

The level design isn't bad, but I feel like it could've used a bit more work though. And maybe mix it with different tile sets. And possibly extend the level a bit longer. And it's recommended to add scenery as well. Also grabbing the silver star at the end for the shine sprite was just pointless. Just leave the shine sprite there, if you're worried it needs a red coin or a silver star to activate it's appearance. You don't, you can just add the shine sprite and it'll still be there. Honestly, I thought you could've put more effort though. 2/5.
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