Space invasion prolouge

[ovidiu2007]

Space invasion prolouge
You started a new adventure, where the sheeps was infested by dark power! You're in the middle of the apocalypse, and at the edge of sheep galaxy! Must beware! These sheeps damage you! If you need health, search, because the coins here are reduced than! BEWARE! Calculating.... 010101010100010.... I have results, you must stop the war, what you hear in level! The war coming soon! Also, write in comments if to be a space or a fire filed background! First to 3 will be used! Also, you cannot vote more of one time. You also can comment likes or dislikes.

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[lordpat]

Holy smokes ovidiu, you improved so much. Even your grammar improved a little. I am so proud of you. I will try to translate the concepts in french so you can understand them, but my french is awful.

A couple of this though. I'd like to see you make levels a bit longer (tu pourrias faire les levels un peut plus grand) and I would also like a bit more space at the switch platform (tu pourrais mettre plus espace sur le platform avec le switch, il est dificile de faire le saut)

But this is a lot better, youa re getting three stars from me!

[Supershroom]

Yeah, it's nice that you've used trees, fences, butterflies and coins at a good amount. You've also placed the falling logs well with the Ctrl button. Triggering the green platform beneath the ground (left to the shy-guys) was a neat touch. But still, although intented to be a sort of prologue, the level was really too short, in fact it ended right when it was about to begin. Also, floating water without anything around it doesn't look good (--> floating items), and the off-wait of the flamethrower at the start is too short with 15 frames only.

It's a fairly good beginning of a level and I wish you make something cool with it.

[ovidiu2007]

You not voted, so i must choose alone. You now can comment, but not vote.

[Supershroom]

Well, we can also give you tips on which background to choose, but in the end it's your very own decision. If you already call it "Space invasion prologue", it's logic to have a Space background, unless you're going up to space later (like in MoD's/Ven's Alignment of Fates, where the first level stays on earth and the second one is in space).

[Jumbo101]

Not too shabby. But I thought this could've been a little more exciting. For one, the level design isn't too bad, but you could've added more to it. Another thing, some items look out of place. And the level could've been longer for a prologue. One final thing to note is that when you hit the switch to disable the wall, it's hard to jump off the platform with the button pulling you back. And when you get to the wall, it still looks like it's there. Try setting it to 0.1 instead of 0. I don't mean to be judgemental, but I give it a 2/5. This was OK, maybe just try a little harder next time. Good job though!

[ovidiu2007]

Hey, guys! I need your help. How you make that black boxes with show and Hide ?
I want your answer down below. You can say me?
isscript brithday! Today i learned to use some scripts.

i	That are: center,is,ooc,rp,warn,info.

[l.m]

Lawl, the code is [.spoiler][/spoiler] (without the period)

Example:

Spoiler: show

Hi!

Also ovidiu, don't overuse the codes on your posts. I'm pretty sure you're not going to do that, but still.

[ovidiu2007]

Like this:

Spoiler: show

i learn?