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Postby cabbage111 » September 24th, 2015, 9:05 pm

Into the volcano
This level took me a while to make also the arrows are suppose to be visible

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Re: Into the volcano

Postby Asterocrat » September 25th, 2015, 12:59 am

I approved this level, but to be clear, it was a close one: Next one, it won't be so sure.

You see, your level clearly lacks effort. You said it took you a while to make this level and I respect that, but there are several examples of cut-off in your level (actually, your entire level is an example of cut-off). Cut-off is when you place borderless tiles on the edge of your paths/formations. Some of the trees you placed also aren't connected with the ground, and they float in midair. The point is, cut-off doesn't really look good nor realistic. To guarantee a good level, you should avoid as much as possible.

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The bone bridges you also placed inside the volcano aren't perfectly flat. An easy way to fix that is by holding Ctrl when placing items: this will automatically lock the item you place to a grid for easy alignment.

Your level also features a lot of grammar mistakes. It is common sense to avoid them as much as possible.

That's all the tips I can give you right now, and my fellow designers will probably agree with me on this one, so if you want to make sure all your future levels are approved, make sure to follow these simple tips ;)
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Re: Into the volcano

Postby Supershroom » September 25th, 2015, 1:32 am

omg is Sk back from the dead? (if so pls post your Art Contest judgings)

and those pics are really cool, I've put it on the wiki

speaking of which, the Focused Guides are really helpful for new designers like you, cabbage :)
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Re: Into the volcano

Postby Jumbo101 » September 25th, 2015, 3:53 am

Lol, I like the images SK put :p
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