mario parkour - collect stars and jump with precise timing

[Mario<Zelda]

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[Awesomeguy 99]

OK, O know this is your first level, its better than a lot of what I've seen, but the jumping gets really, REALLY tedious after a while. I especially didn't like that you pretty much have to guess where the pendulum is if you aren't zoomed out. The mechanic where you bounce off walls with cannons has been done before, but its still a nice addition, but the level is pretty bland over all with no decoration and the same tiles over and over. I would recommend looking through the Level Designing Forum for tips and ideas. Its not too bad of a level, like I said before, its a lot better than a lot of first levels I've seen, and I'll give it 2 stars.