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Green Hill
(Sorry if this is a repost) The original classic remastered (not entirely) into Super Mario 63! Green Hill Zone Act 1 from Sonic the Hedgehog! This is my first level.

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I'll rate this a 3/5. Pretty good start. Now, I have some suggestions:

You ought to add more corner tiles. There were cut-offs here and there. Now, I understand this is supposed to be a remaster of a level, but try to avoid the cut-offs in other levels.

Add some tile variety. You used a lot of jungle tiles, and there weren't any other kinds of tiles. Using other tiles and mixing things up a bit can make your levels look pretty.

Put some more trees or scenery. That can also make levels look better.

And also, check out other people's levels. You might get some ideas.
I made a topic about Designing Ideas and Tips if you need help with improvement or coming up with ideas.