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Forty-Year Forest (Tree Branches)

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Postby F.L.U.D.D.3001 » November 10th, 2015, 10:55 am

Forty-Year Forest
Another short level. But with a little more style!

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Re: Forty-Year Forest (Tree Branches)

Postby Charcoal » November 10th, 2015, 1:14 pm

Dude, the detail, it's incredible. However, it took some time to load the level. Still giving you 5/5. That's some awesome stuff.

Btw, you ever thought about doing LDCs?
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Re: Forty-Year Forest (Tree Branches)

Postby F.L.U.D.D.3001 » November 10th, 2015, 1:16 pm

Vesoralla wrote:Dude, the detail, it's incredible. However, it took some time to load the level. Still giving you 5/5. That's some awesome stuff.


Thanks a lot! I didn't realize that it took a long time to load, I tested this level on my good computer. Sorry. But thanks for the 5 stars. I worked hard for it.

Oh, LDC's? Not really. Not too much into that. But if I get around to it, I'll think about doing it.
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Re: Forty-Year Forest (Tree Branches)

Postby Kimonio » November 10th, 2015, 1:28 pm

Dude.

This is remarkable.

Who are you.

Where did you come from.

Oh my god.

My one recommendation is to cut back on the items. You did a great job of giving it detail to look like leaves, but there's a balance between quality and quantity somewhere. You can find it, I can see it in you already.
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Re: Forty-Year Forest (Tree Branches)

Postby F.L.U.D.D.3001 » November 10th, 2015, 1:33 pm

Kimonio wrote:Dude.

This is remarkable.

Who are you.

Where did you come from.

Oh my god.


Thanks, I'm glad you like the level. I spent a while working on it, glad to see you appreciate it. I guess that the forest theme just kind of works for me.
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Re: Forty-Year Forest (Tree Branches)

Postby Charcoal » November 10th, 2015, 1:40 pm

F.L.U.D.D.3001 wrote:Thanks, I'm glad you like the level. I spent a while working on it, glad to see you appreciate it. I guess that the forest theme just kind of works for me.

Yeah, high five! :D
I like using forest/nature themes too.
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Re: Forty-Year Forest (Tree Branches)

Postby Jumbo101 » November 10th, 2015, 6:03 pm

This level is short and decorative. Fascinating job! 5/5.
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Re: Forty-Year Forest (Tree Branches)

Postby 1018peter » November 11th, 2015, 5:17 am

The way you use the bushes is awesome.

Only one problem,the "bounce leaves" are hard to get the timing right with the triple jump. Maybe you should just make the jumps possible with a double jump. It would ease the problem.
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Re: Forty-Year Forest (Tree Branches)

Postby F.L.U.D.D.3001 » November 11th, 2015, 6:37 am

1018peter wrote:The way you use the bushes is awesome.

Only one problem,the "bounce leaves" are hard to get the timing right with the triple jump. Maybe you should just make the jumps possible with a double jump. It would ease the problem.


Ok then, if I ever make a level like this again I will surely take that advice.
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Re: Forty-Year Forest (Tree Branches)

Postby Supershroom » November 11th, 2015, 11:15 am

1018peter wrote:The way you use the bushes is awesome.

Only one problem,the "bounce leaves" are hard to get the timing right with the triple jump. Maybe you should just make the jumps possible with a double jump. It would ease the problem.

The easiest way is to use circle green platforms with speed of 180. The oscillating blocks tend to be glitchy and annoying because you usually don't jump off properly despite you pressing the up button so much.

Also, I'd love to see more within the trees than volcano tiles. There can also be plateau tiles and brown bricks.
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Supershroom
Our local SM63 Spielberg

 
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Joined: June 21st, 2014, 5:22 am
Location: Filmstudio for SM63. Sometimes also LL.

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