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Postby ~MP3 Amplifier~ » November 11th, 2015, 7:24 am

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I've just realised I never posted this onto the portal. This was my level I made for the 4th 25quared mini-LDC. It didn't place too well, but I guess that's what happens when you try to convert a plan originally for a regular sized level, into a plan for a tiny level lol.

I hope it is worth playing at least. :)

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Re: Trapped

Postby Jumbo101 » November 11th, 2015, 10:03 am

Not bad for a 25x25 level. 5/5.
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Re: Trapped

Postby l.m » November 11th, 2015, 4:43 pm

I hate this banner 4/5

(I can't recall if I actually did the judgings for the 4th 25squared contest but either way, that's a solid level, though there are minor flaws, one of them being trying to fit so much things into 25x25, and the fact that it simply felt bland for me, and wasn't really remarkable. BuT oTheR THaN ThaAT it'S pRETy GoOd)
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Re: Trapped

Postby KABOOM » November 11th, 2015, 5:25 pm

4/5 for four very good Silver Star challenges...followed by the invisible maze with crushing blocks.
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Re: Trapped

Postby Supershroom » November 12th, 2015, 12:28 am

Well, the main critique points in the 4th mini-LDC were that the middle room ate up too much space and, as KABOOM said, the squashing blocks. I've still rated this 5 stars because the graphical concept is really awesome. (and honestly I expected this to place better than 11th)
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Re: Trapped

Postby ~MP3 Amplifier~ » November 12th, 2015, 6:16 am

♥♥♥♥ u the banner is awesome <3

(I'm kidding it took me like 5 mins)

Also thanks for the critique. I have no plans to improve this level since it's nothing really important to me, I only made it for the contest, and tbh probably wouldn't have made anything if I didn't have a level plan I wanted to use up. The concept of doing 4 rooms with daunting challenges was like a leftover plan from the 2014 Halloween mini LDC that I never entered.
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