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This isn't really anything I'd prefer. The volcano tiles are rather unfitting with the grassy backround. Also, next time try putting some scenery. Otherwise it just feels bland.
And the part with the bullets increases the chances of getting hit, and it just produces lag. Nothing special here, just an overall, short, boring experience. 1/5.

Jumbo101 wrote:This isn't really anything I'd prefer...Nothing special here, just an overall, short, boring experience.

Don't you think that's a little...too harsh? Eh, it's your rating, not mine.


Alright, I can certainly see that you have some understanding with platforming. Now I'm just going to leave some tips for you.

-- Patch it up a bit. Add some scenery. Make it look nice. You've got plants, rocks, and other tiles at your disposal. Mess around with those.

-- Hills background and volcano tiles don't really mix well unless you're using volcano tiles to make trees. Try to make a background

-- Tone down the difficulty. I was having a rough time at the beginning. The rotating block I think was rotating a bit too fast.

-- Make your levels longer. Those tend to be more fun than shorter ones.

-- Take your time. You don't need to rush your levels or anything. There's no race or competition to be the best. Just enjoy yourself.

That's all I've got. Hope this helps.

Disagreed. That bottom volcano tile gives a passable soil effect. It could work with some fitting extras.

Kudos for attempting difficulty, but was mandatory falling for silver stars really necessary?

Last, but not least:

Raiyuuni wrote:Disagreed. That bottom volcano tile gives a passable soil effect. It could work with some fitting extras.

Oh yeah. That too. Because I've been using them as dirt tiles.