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War of the stars pt 2

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Postby AreaxisFromMC » November 26th, 2015, 12:20 am

War of the stars pt 2
Hey guys!!! its me again and i made the pt 2 of this new series i made, Make sure to play pt 1 before this! Hope you enjoy it! oh and also the reason why i put glass around the stars is becuz idk how to make nan stuffs xD

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Re: War of the stars pt 2

Postby Charcoal » November 26th, 2015, 6:51 am

Eh...both part 1 and 2 are too short.
The second level is a bit too easy.
However, you do have some interesting graphical design showing. I suggest adding more of that along with more challenges, obstacles, and longer levels. You're showing some skill; I can see that. :)
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Re: War of the stars pt 2

Postby Supershroom » November 26th, 2015, 9:22 am

AreaxisFromMC wrote:oh and also the reason why i put glass around the stars is becuz idk how to make nan stuffs xD

You wanna know how to disable things? Go here. Just be sure to paste the level code into Word or anything else which supports a search function. But the shine sprites behind ice cubes are also quite common and look fancy.

However this level entirely lacks gameplay. Stories a nice but since we're still playing a platforming game ultimately, therefore you should not neglect gameplay elements and graphics also on a story level.
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Re: War of the stars pt 2

Postby AreaxisFromMC » November 27th, 2015, 3:55 am

Thnx for the help guys love u runouw community :D

Supershroom wrote:
AreaxisFromMC wrote:oh and also the reason why i put glass around the stars is becuz idk how to make nan stuffs xD

You wanna know how to disable things? Go here. Just be sure to paste the level code into Word or anything else which supports a search function. But the shine sprites behind ice cubes are also quite common and look fancy.

However this level entirely lacks gameplay. Stories a nice but since we're still playing a platforming game ultimately, therefore you should not neglect gameplay elements and graphics also on a story level.


I looked at that before and it didnt help me much becuz i didnt understand a thing xD ill need a video tutorial for that :P

Vesoralla wrote:Eh...both part 1 and 2 are too short.
The second level is a bit too easy.
However, you do have some interesting graphical design showing. I suggest adding more of that along with more challenges, obstacles, and longer levels. You're showing some skill; I can see that. :)


Im sorry dat u didnt like it becuz there was no challenge, dont worry ill be adding some action in the next part :D
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Re: War of the stars pt 2

Postby l.m » November 27th, 2015, 8:45 am

Merged posts. Next time, please don't post thrice in a row, instead use the Edit button in the top of your post.

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AreaxisFromMC wrote:I looked at that before and it didnt help me much becuz i didnt understand a thing xD ill need a video tutorial for that :P


I don't there is any video tutorials explaining that. But I believe is as easy as just going into your Level Code, and adding a 0 in the front of the item code.
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