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Vesoralla wrote:It looks great. Just keep practicing.
Maybe make it longer or add other tiles to mix things up a bit and add more variety. Other than that, that's all I have to say.
Maybe take look at other really good designers for inspiration.

Also, there's an LDC, a Level Designer Contest, still open if you want to join it.

Supershroom wrote:There is a technical error with the right level transition.



The half strip you've left free allows you to cross it, and you're glitched and have to restart. It needs a full tile next to the transition in order to block it. Also the bridge items at the silver star next to the pendulum are not visible while playing. The camera cuts away the lowest half tile. This could be intentional but it's still uncomfortable for players puzzling over if they need another switch or FLUDD etc. to get the thing. Those are just things you have to playtest a little more.

The left transition is kinda sparse, but the rest is very impressive for a first level! I also give 4 stars. And as said we have LDC open if you're interested

FluorescenceLight wrote:Really good beginning level. But you should add more decorations in some places and add some tiles variation.

4 stars overall.