Goomba Land Galaxy

[GreatToadMan]

Goomba Land Galaxy
Meh

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[Charcoal]

Meh

Eh?

Anyway, this level is decent. I suggest:

Making it longer. Put a little more effort into levels if you're willing to.
Put some more variants of tiles in other than just jungle.
Decent use of foliage. You can add a little more, but not too much.

That's about it. Keep it up.

[cliffy987]

Good job I like the idea of the level just a few small problems: Since it's a "Galaxy" you should have put a space background, the level was also a bit too short and some parts were a tiny bit sloppy or lacking in detail other than that the level was great! 3/5 stars keep up the good work!

[Charcoal]

Since it's a "Galaxy" you should have put a space background

Well...not necessarily. Some galaxies in the SMG games had sky backgrounds. I remember one of them had a waterfall background.
But yeah, in other cases, space background would be nice.