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Never defeatable pt 1

PostPosted: November 30th, 2015, 4:28 am
by JayHDGamer
Never defeatable pt 1
Hey guys! I've made a new level called Never defeatable and also AreaxisFromMC's brother in real life! I hope you guys enjoy this level!

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Re: Never defeatable pt 1

PostPosted: November 30th, 2015, 2:56 pm
by l.m
Really short, somewhat laggy, and enemy spam. There's little to no gameplay, and it's not fun at all, and pretty easy actually. 1 star.

Re: Never defeatable pt 1

PostPosted: November 30th, 2015, 3:42 pm
by Awesomeguy 99
For a level called never defeatable that was really easy. Enemy spam prominent, and laggy as heck. I didn't get any real enjoyment out of this. 1/5 Stars.

Re: Never defeatable pt 1

PostPosted: November 30th, 2015, 4:15 pm
by Charcoal
Enemy spam =/= Impossible
Your levels need more effort. I suggest you look at how your brother designs his levels and apply that to what you can do.

Re: Never defeatable pt 1

PostPosted: December 1st, 2015, 2:09 am
by Supershroom
Welcome to the forums, Jay! Like Veso said, you and your brother can support each other indeed.

But yeah, according to FF, spamming enemies is not the way to make a level thrilling and attractive. Though this one had some weird effects and didn't lag on my computer (luckily you didn't spam bob-ombs, bullies or large goombas). I feel like giving this 2 stars. It's acceptable for a person's first level, but of course I'd like to see more on your next one. Try also more things with tiles and decorations.

Re: Never defeatable pt 1

PostPosted: December 2nd, 2015, 2:54 pm
by Jumbo101
This level is bland at best, and also keep note: Enemy spam does not equal a challenge. I also suppose the lag ruins the experience as well. And I kinda had a hard time reading some of the signs. You should also try extending the levels length. I personally recommend level designing tips to design better levels. But I can't blame you for this being your first level. But I'm afraid I'll have to give this 1/5. I do apologize, I just can't find anything interesting.