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Posted: **November 30th, 2015, 4:28 am**

Never defeatable pt 1
Hey guys! I've made a new level called Never defeatable and also AreaxisFromMC's brother in real life! I hope you guys enjoy this level!

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Posted: **November 30th, 2015, 2:56 pm**

Really short, somewhat laggy, and enemy spam. There's little to no gameplay, and it's not fun at all, and pretty easy actually. 1 star.

Posted: **November 30th, 2015, 3:42 pm**

For a level called never defeatable that was really easy. Enemy spam prominent, and laggy as heck. I didn't get any real enjoyment out of this. 1/5 Stars.

Posted: **November 30th, 2015, 4:15 pm**

Enemy spam =/= Impossible
Your levels need more effort. I suggest you look at how your brother designs his levels and apply that to what you can do.

Posted: **December 1st, 2015, 2:09 am**

Welcome to the forums, Jay! Like Veso said, you and your brother can support each other indeed.

But yeah, according to FF, spamming enemies is not the way to make a level thrilling and attractive. Though this one had some weird effects and didn't lag on my computer (luckily you didn't spam bob-ombs, bullies or large goombas). I feel like giving this 2 stars. It's acceptable for a person's first level, but of course I'd like to see more on your next one. Try also more things with tiles and decorations.

Posted: **December 2nd, 2015, 2:54 pm**

This level is bland at best, and also keep note: Enemy spam does not equal a challenge. I also suppose the lag ruins the experience as well. And I kinda had a hard time reading some of the signs. You should also try extending the levels length. I personally recommend level designing tips to design better levels. But I can't blame you for this being your first level. But I'm afraid I'll have to give this 1/5. I do apologize, I just can't find anything interesting.

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