The Rambow road!

[August101-63]

The Rambow road!
The rambow road remix!

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[Jumbo101]

This level is too easy. Aside from that, it also has a lot of misplaced platforms. It seems that this level focuses more on items than tiles. Also this level could be longer, it feels too short for the fun to begin. I rate 1/5. You'll be fine if you read on tips about Level Designing.

[HickRanger]

This is a fine level - it has slight cutoff and there's no way any normal player would think to go down where the last Silver Star is, but other than that it's alright.

This level is too easy. Aside from that, it also has a lot of misplaced platforms. It seems that this level focuses more on items than tiles. Also this level could be longer, it feels too short for the fun to begin.

The level is easy, but it's not so easy that there's no fun.
The level is also short, but there don't really seem to be many ideas here to begin with, so extending it may not be a solution.
The philosophy behind this level seems to be "Put whatever items will work in the air - Mario has FLUDD, so it'll be easy anyway".

Items aren't bad, and they can certainly do more than tiles, but there's very little land in this level.

I don't agree with the misplaced platforms bit, but everything else is true to some extent.

I rate 1/5. You'll be fine if you read on tips about Level Designing.

I think 1/5 is harsh for a level that works fine but simply isn't very entertaining.
I give it 3/5 and recommend you think about how your level will play more.
This level is designed decently, but the major flaw is that it's simply not enough. You need a longer level for the fun to really get going.
The amount of tiles and how the platforms are placed is up to you, but just remember that entertainment is the most important factor here.

In short, you get 3/5. This level just isn't fun, and there's no easy solution to that.
Just try to use more tiles when you have a good place for them and make sure players will need to invest at least a few minutes into your level to beat it.

You're doing alright, just keep trying. You can make it.