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Postby Raijun » December 19th, 2015, 12:38 pm

Freezy Cave
Just a nice little course. Have fun playing it :)

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I made it impossible to go up and into the final pipe using FLUDD on the first pipe. Thanks to 1018peter for telling me about this shortcut.
Last edited by Raijun on December 21st, 2015, 1:02 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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Review: Freezy Cave

Postby HickRanger » December 20th, 2015, 4:30 pm

The level is good, but it's too short. It took only one or two minutes.

4/5, make it longer next time.
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Re: Review: Freezy Cave

Postby Raijun » December 20th, 2015, 5:09 pm

HickRanger wrote:The level is good, but it's too short. It took only one or two minutes.

4/5, make it longer next time.


Thanks! I didn't intend it to be very long, but I'd better not make levels so short next :)
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Re: Freezy Cave

Postby Charcoal » December 20th, 2015, 7:10 pm

Yeah, make your levels longer. Also, add more details and work on your graphical design.

You also need to slow down a bit and not rush your levels. If you take your time, you'll surely do better.
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Re: Freezy Cave

Postby 1018peter » December 21st, 2015, 5:00 am

By the way,once you get the Rocket FLUDD,you can just go back to the crossing pipes and rocket yourself up and into the pipe.
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Re: Freezy Cave

Postby Raijun » December 21st, 2015, 6:50 am

1018peter wrote:By the way,once you get the Rocket FLUDD,you can just go back to the crossing pipes and rocket yourself up and into the pipe.


Oh, that's one thing I didn't notice... Let me fix that real quick.

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Maybe not the best solution and doesn't look very aesthetically good, but at least it works.
I do playtest, but usually play the level the way the player is intended to play, so I should pay more attention to those little details and try out every possible unintentional shortcut. Thanks for telling me about this.
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Re: Freezy Cave

Postby Supershroom » December 21st, 2015, 7:35 am

Please put the fixed code into the opening post (there's an Edit button for that), so it will appear directly when players load the level from "Play this level!" or the embedded in-game designer.
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Re: Freezy Cave

Postby Raijun » December 21st, 2015, 9:49 am

Santa Gregor wrote:Please put the fixed code into the opening post (there's an Edit button for that), so it will appear directly when players load the level from "Play this level!" or the embedded in-game designer.


Thanks, I'll keep that in mind.
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