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Freezy Cave

PostPosted: December 19th, 2015, 12:38 pm
by Raijun
Freezy Cave
Just a nice little course. Have fun playing it :)

EDIT: Fixed version
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I made it impossible to go up and into the final pipe using FLUDD on the first pipe. Thanks to 1018peter for telling me about this shortcut.

Review: Freezy Cave

PostPosted: December 20th, 2015, 4:30 pm
by HickRanger
The level is good, but it's too short. It took only one or two minutes.

4/5, make it longer next time.

Re: Review: Freezy Cave

PostPosted: December 20th, 2015, 5:09 pm
by Raijun
HickRanger wrote:The level is good, but it's too short. It took only one or two minutes.

4/5, make it longer next time.


Thanks! I didn't intend it to be very long, but I'd better not make levels so short next :)

Re: Freezy Cave

PostPosted: December 20th, 2015, 7:10 pm
by Charcoal
Yeah, make your levels longer. Also, add more details and work on your graphical design.

You also need to slow down a bit and not rush your levels. If you take your time, you'll surely do better.

Re: Freezy Cave

PostPosted: December 21st, 2015, 5:00 am
by 1018peter
By the way,once you get the Rocket FLUDD,you can just go back to the crossing pipes and rocket yourself up and into the pipe.

Re: Freezy Cave

PostPosted: December 21st, 2015, 6:50 am
by Raijun
1018peter wrote:By the way,once you get the Rocket FLUDD,you can just go back to the crossing pipes and rocket yourself up and into the pipe.


Oh, that's one thing I didn't notice... Let me fix that real quick.

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Maybe not the best solution and doesn't look very aesthetically good, but at least it works.
I do playtest, but usually play the level the way the player is intended to play, so I should pay more attention to those little details and try out every possible unintentional shortcut. Thanks for telling me about this.

Re: Freezy Cave

PostPosted: December 21st, 2015, 7:35 am
by Supershroom
Please put the fixed code into the opening post (there's an Edit button for that), so it will appear directly when players load the level from "Play this level!" or the embedded in-game designer.

Re: Freezy Cave

PostPosted: December 21st, 2015, 9:49 am
by Raijun
Santa Gregor wrote:Please put the fixed code into the opening post (there's an Edit button for that), so it will appear directly when players load the level from "Play this level!" or the embedded in-game designer.


Thanks, I'll keep that in mind.