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OITD Part 1: The five Secrets
Mario was just being his regular self, defeating Bowser a couple of times a year, when he was suddenly warped to an strange location named The Oasis In The Desert. Who warped him there? and why?

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This is the first part of the series that is a prequel to my previously posted level, Stronghold of Darkness. Hope you like it!

Please avoid double posting. Instead, just use the EDIT button in your post and add what you want.

Thanks for the advice!

Pretty good! But bullets in the water are too easy with Turbo fludd= =

@EdwardLan Thanks! and I know that it's pretty easy to get past those bullet bills with the Turbo fludd, it's just something that's fun to do.

The level is good and entertaining. The door floating in midair is kind of weird though, and I don't see how this is a prequel to anything...

I think you placed a few too many platforms and that the Metal Star should have a shorter length, since you don't need the Metal Star for a very long time.

All in all, it's good: four stars. You have a bit of decor and your level is great, but you should add some more decorations and make sure nothing looks odd.

@HickRanger thanks again for reviewing my level, I can't tell you in words how much it means to me.
And about you not seeing how this is a prequel to anything, you should check out the other levels in this series.

~Nuclear_Blaze

I don't feel like going in-depth right now, so I'll just give some basic tips that'll help you with other ways of improving.

First off, make some longer levels. They tend to be more enjoyable in my eyes.

Second, you seem to have a good start on tile and item variation and whatnot. Add a little more and add some unique ideas, and you can do some really cool things.

Lastly, take a look at some levels of some of the really good level designers (i.e. MP3, Jumbo, MoD, ...Me ). Take some inspiration and ideas from them. It can help.

@Vesoralla thanks for the feedback! I'll take your tips into consideration for my next level that I post.

it was kinda wierd, ya know, i didnt really like the snow in the middle of the desert
but i liked the challenge of your level, ill definitely play the rest.