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40 Red Coins
Just collect all the 40 red coins. (Map: 40 Red Coins: The Grasslands)

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This was a quite solid piece, a good collection quest. However, there are a few annoyances, mostly the ground being very low at the beginning. The camera automatically cuts off the lowest half tile while playing, so there should be at least one more row of tiles than there is now. Generally a moderate amount of ground below - not too few, not too much - is aesthetically pleasant. You've already formed a good variety of shapes. However, once we approach the upper region, things become quite minimalistic. There should be more present than just a few bowser and metal cage tiles. The very fast platform carousel is a bit intimidating, but also no proper obstacle (simply too fast), and within the metal cage, one red coin after the other is placed on the clouds. I'd say 20 red coins would fit this length more, or you could just have added more space or another transition and separate the red coins a bit more.

Also you can use the Ctrl button to place items cleanly on an 8x8-grid. This is important as the untidy row of falling logs is rather striking on first sight already.

Overall, you show good rudiments. 3 stars.

Thanks, Supershroom, for the explanation.
Maybe i'll improve everything in the sequel. (40 Red Coins 2: Merlon's Sky, Shy Guy Clock Tower)

awesome level, but really, really laggy. so laggy i am unable to play it. its gameplay looks spectacular though, giving it a five star for the level and minus 1 for the lag.

Okay, this might be a good idea to rate the level after you finish. Comment to let me know what's your rating and info about what you experience (to be honest, of course). Don't lie, don't put it a bad rating (unless if real), and DON'T PLAGIARIZE.
-BowserJrGaming (TheNewBowser)
(I was supposed to name myself "TheNewBowser", but it was taken)

BowserJrGaming wrote:Okay, this might be a good idea to rate the level after you finish. Comment to let me know what's your rating and info about what you experience (to be honest, of course). Don't lie, don't put it a bad rating (unless if real), and DON'T PLAGIARIZE.
-BowserJrGaming (TheNewBowser)
(I was supposed to name myself "TheNewBowser", but it was taken)

Well. We have summed up all of our rules on portal comments here, and I agree that it's dumb for a level's owner if many people say the same thing about it. In such cases, if you truly feel bad about a comment, you can use the shiny Mr. Report button (next to the Quote button), and commit it to the staff.

As for the name you wanted first - I've looked through the memberlist and don't see anyone called TheNewBowser or similar. Better ask a global moderator (Doram or ~MP3 Amplifier~) about this, they have the power to change people's names upon request.