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my first level

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Postby lincolnpepper111 » January 22nd, 2016, 1:19 pm

my first level
MY FIRST LEVEL EVER!!! i hope you enjoy! collect 8 red coins then head to the finish!

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Re: my first level

Postby Supershroom » January 24th, 2016, 5:36 am

The transition to the right is quite sparse, it's only 7 red coins and the sling star above the shine sprite does nothing. Quite unfortunate, the first transition was quite solid and well-decorated. Overall this is a bit short, but still enjoyable. I'm giving 3 stars.
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Re: my first level

Postby Nightmarionette123 » February 24th, 2016, 4:26 pm

You miscounted the red coins because, when I played the level, there were only 7 and I mean 7 red coins, so I cheated and added another red coin and then that meant there was 8 red coins then got the shine sprite and finished the game. (P.S. I don't blame you) ;)
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