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Level 2-Ground of Aqua

PostPosted: January 26th, 2016, 10:45 pm
by Charlotte
Level 2-Ground of Aqua
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Review: Level 2-Ground of Aqua

PostPosted: January 27th, 2016, 8:26 am
by HickRanger
The signs in this level are nearly indecipherable because of your English. No offense.
You should use Google Translate, or perhaps PM me what you want to say and I could rephrase it.

The arrows make it very clear where Mario is meant to go.
Mario should know where to do, but you should try to make the terrain suggest that instead of using arrows unless Mario can go multiple ways.

This level is also too short. Although Mario CAN drown underwater, he is not at risk because coins refill Mario's health. Blue coins do so especially.
You should put coins more sparingly to try and make Mario rush a little bit.

3/5 as before, you can improve.