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Level 5-Desert Hill

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Postby Charlotte » January 28th, 2016, 6:33 am

Level 5-Desert Hill
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Re: Level 5-Desert Hill

Postby nin10mode » January 30th, 2016, 7:18 am

My only concern is that its quite laggy. You could probably tone down the height.

It's a bit short as well, but there's nothing wrong, gameplay-wise.

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Re: Level 5-Desert Hill

Postby Supershroom » January 31st, 2016, 6:58 am

Overall I've enjoyed this effort quite well, and it looks very promising, so I gave it 4 stars! I would be very interested to see you making a larger level over several days.

About the structuring producing lag, you should basically take care about the transitions not being too full with stuff (especially enemies), and rather extend the level to the horizontal to separate various rooms if you can.

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