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Postby Yoshi Boo 118 » January 30th, 2016, 7:38 am

Cheating in the Runolympics? What you've done will not be tolerated...and there's only one way to pay for it...

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path%20to%20%3Ci%3Ehim%3C%2Fi%3E%20may%20be%20your%20most%20difficult%20trial%20yet%2E%20To%20return%20here%2C%20take%20the%20pipe%20hidden%20under%20the%20first%20cave%20tree%2E|10,808,904|10,824,904|10,840,904|10,856,904|11,136,872|11,152,872|45,2688,808,0,300,200,70,70,0,40,0|28,2736,432,1,0|28,2672,432,1,0|10,2600,880|10,2616,880|10,2632,880|10,2664,880|10,2696,880|10,2744,880|10,2776,880|59,2495,881,1|11,2648,874|11,2680,874|11,2712,874|11,2728,874|11,2760,874|2,2624,832|2,2656,832|2,2688,832|2,2720,832|2,2752,832|79,3368,816,15|070,2835,876,1|28,2704,432,1,0|9,2920,864,2,0,130,0,0,0,Right,none,0.5,80,8,Right,3,0,1|73,3368,888,To%20anyone%20reading%20this%3A%0D%0DZoom%20out%20near%20the%20log%20bridge%20that%27s%20over%20some%20magma%2C%20and%20use%20this%20star%20here%20to%20progress%2E%20Follow%20the%20metal%20arrow%2E%20If%20I%20don%27t%20make%20it%2C%20hopefully%20you%20will%2E%20Good%20luck%2E%2E%2Echeater%2E|59,3372,866,1|130,3292,888,1,10|2,3296,856|69,3209,834,0|2,2920,792|2,2676,1046|2,3072,792|2,3136,760|2,3200,792|45,3136,832,0,150,100,-1,92,0,0,0|9,3008,904,0,3,0,40,0,0,Right,Up,0.5,5,1,Left,3,0,1|9,3184,896,0,3,0,50,0,0,Right,Up,0.5,5,1,Left,3,0,1|20,2928,272|27,2560,352|24,2448,288|71,1872,277,Right,0,4,20,0,3,0|2,1920,96|2,1984,160|2,2063,259|2,2320,240|2,2207,190|2,1872,248|57,1984,216,1|55,2163,129,1|51,2321,279,1|130,2070,288,1,350|5,2096,480|40,1747,834,2056,544|2,2064,496|2,2128,496|131,2141,549,1,350|145,2168,392,1,90|145,2024,392,1,270|45,2096,384,180,100,100,64,92,0,0,0|4,2096,392|2,2608,400|2,2768,400|7,2720,576,0,5,0,40,0,0,none,Up,0.5,3,1,40|2,2960,240|2,2896,240|56,3314,77,1|74,3408,40,30|73,1408,104,%3Cu%3ETorch%20of%20Perseverance%3C%2Fu%3E%0D%3Ci%3E%22If%20you%20are%20going%20through%20hell%2C%20keep%20going%2E%22%3C%2Fi%3E%0D%28Below%20that%2C%20you%20noticed%20something%20hastily%20etched%20onto%20the%20bottom%20of%20the%20sign%2E%2E%2E%29%0D%0D%3Ci%3EA%20golden%20signal%0DAfter%20touching%20every%20torch%0DTrust%20in%20its%20power%2E%20%3C%2Fi%3E%20|140,1825,523,1,60|37,3232,538,20,0|52,2456,1063,1|2,3232,538|2,3160,544|2,3339,424|129,3443,1100,1,NaN|131,3131,510,0,205|140,3024,560,1,90|140,3232,160,1,90|2,3312,168|2,3360,168|2,3408,168|2,3456,168|2,3408,16|140,2224,528,1,95|57,2528,608,1|55,2831,518,1|28,3216,496,1,0|28,3248,496,1,0|3,1360,88|45,1360,41,0,40,20,-1,92,1,0,0|144,1360,64,1,270|133,1302,66,1,0|79,1648,368,25|7,2656,576,0,5,0,40,0,0,none,Up,0.5,3,1,40|2,2688,544|2,2688,384|2,2688,480|60,2910,241,0|2,1648,864|12,3096,192|2,3072,160|2,3120,160|8,1648,368,3,4,100,0,2|2,1648,240|2,1648,432|2,1744,344|2,1552,344|077,1400,824,undefined|067,1400,824,0|2,3184,464|55,2133,957,0|57,1920,152,0|2,2560,280|2,2448,224|34,2664,968,1,0|7,3232,200,0,3,0,40,0,0,none,Down,0.5,3,1,40|34,2720,968,1,0|129,2816,944,1,0|129,2560,946,0,0|77,2688,944|40,2640,960,1,824|45,1648,40,180,100,100,64,92,0,0,0|2,1728,48|2,1568,48|79,3280,48,2|132,3344,464,0,350|2,3175,388|133,2960,872,0,45|133,3040,472,1,0|2,3040,432|54,3001,466,1|78,3496,176,2|2,1333,848|45,1488,40,180,100,100,64,92,0,50,0|2,1072,160|2,1232,160|2,352,456|2,608,456|73,3744,872,Congratulations%20are%20in%20order%2E%20I%20am%20the%20wise%20%3Cb%3EDoram%3C%2Fb%3E%2E%20You%27ve%20done%20well%20to%20make%20it%20through%20all%20our%20trials%2E%20I%20hope%20you%20realize%20how%20cheating%20bears%20nothing%20good%20in%20the%20end%2E%20Now%2C%20go%20compete%21|6,3952,640|45,4124,1082,0,20,10,64,92,0,0,0|7,3824,680,0,3,0,60,0,0,none,Down,0.5,1,0,40|7,3952,904,0,9,0,999,0,0,none,Up,99,1,1,999|6,4000,16|6,4000,80|6,3904,80|6,3904,16|7,3664,232,0,2,0,330,0,0,none,Down,0.5,1,1,330|7,4080,850,0,3,0,60,0,0,none,Up,0.5,1,0,60|73,4128,872,%3Cb%3EStar%20King%3C%2Fb%3E%3A%20So%2E%2E%2Eyou%27re%20been%20given%20a%20second%20chance%2E%20I%20expect%20we%20won%27t%20be%20seeing%20you%20here%20again%2E%2E%2Efarewell%2E|077,3792,792,undefined|077,4120,808,undefined|2,4048,656|2,3856,656|125,3872,264,1,175|125,4032,264,0,185|110,4158,820,1,0|124,3792,840,1,0|45,4078,520,315,40,20,-1,92,0,0,0|45,3952,856,0,40,20,-1,92,0,0,0|45,3827,520,50,40,20,-1,92,0,0,0|45,3872,192,0,100,100,-1,92,0,0,0|144,4096,536,1,40|144,3808,536,1,320|144,3952,881,1,270|126,3760,184,1,0|126,4144,184,0,0|45,4032,192,0,100,100,-1,92,0,0,0|123,3914,720,1,95|105,3989,800,1,260|144,3810,384,1,0|108,3984,568,0,0|144,4064,384,1,0|9,4144,272,0,4,0,100,0,0,Right,Down,0.5,33,13,Left,0,0,1|9,3760,272,0,4,0,100,0,0,Right,Down,0.5,33,13,Left,0,0,1|108,3912,568,1,0|144,4094,384,1,0|144,3840,384,1,0|18,4048,384,9,0|18,3856,384,-9,0|067,3792,793,0|2,3952,592|067,4120,808,0|2,272,688|6,3792,1149|9,3784,776,1,0,15,0,0,0,Right,none,0.5,5,8,Left,3,0,1|9,3800,776,1,0,15,0,0,0,Left,none,0.5,5,8,Right,3,0,1|81,1304,24,30|73,2544,904,%3Cu%3EA%20Helpful%20Haiku%3C%2Fu%3E%0D%3Ci%3EIgnore%20red%20arrows%0DUntil%20flight%20has%20been%20achieved%0DThen%2C%20follow%20their%20guide%2E%20%3C%2Fi%3E|143,2688,515,1,90|116,1296,688,1,60|2,368,608|67,2600,920,0|67,2760,920,0|67,2776,920,1|67,2616,920,1|2,2565,10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Awesome Things, and My Works: show
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Credit to Buff for my normal avatar and lordpat for the Red Yoshi sig. Ninny made the Valentine's Gift. <3 Thanks!


Click on the left and right side of my main signature to see my Level Series (Paper Mario 63) and my Levels!

Stories (That are more than just a prologue long):
Unlocked (One of my first stories, pretty much abandoned now)
Koopa's Final Blow (Halloween 2011)
Resonance (Posted here first, but other link is better)
The Gibus Games (TF2 related)
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Re: Atonement by Fire!

Postby Supershroom » January 30th, 2016, 7:43 am

Lel, I kinda waited for this to come. Congratz again!

My judging from the mini-LDC wrote:FUN: 9
Hoo! A puzzle level! This one made a real clever usage of the space allowed. There were many good exciting challenges with a fine difficulty progression. My only legit complaint is the “boss” room being a little bit easy (there could have been more work on creating an actual boss battle, not just King Kaliente sitting in the middle). Otherwise it was a very fun experience.

GRAPHICS: 3.75
These are good but expandable. You’ve added a good mix of tile variation and especially the connection of small bridges with background tiles is a good touch. The brick combinations within the volcano tiles are fine, but the landscape overall is a bit sparse. The last room provides a good atmosphere of being an exit room with its pillars, but the choice of faded bricks all over the place is not optimal. There are also light and dark grey bricks and window tiles which can add to this.

OTHER: 4
+0.75: This is quite a funny plot! We’re all cheaters somewhere … and all the signs and poems are well written indeed.
+0.5: Regarding the size restrictions, good job on no loading time / no lag and still a good amount of scenery.
+0.25: Awesome effect on leaving the volcano / underground whatever with the platform triggered from the shine sprite.
-0.25: I actually dislike there being another invisibility star in the middle of the four circle platforms on the way to the goal with the wing cap, just to trick us later. Then again, with a bit of sagacity this can be cheated because the wall of switch tiles isn’t exactly closed.
-0.25: The last room is quite narrow, zooming out will make the transition border visible. There could have been some space saved in the left boss room to even this out within the allowed space.

OVERALL: 16.75
Big props to you on pulling out a fantastic puzzle with such a sweet plot. If only you would have repped your team … but then again I probably wouldn’t have given you that much support on fixing bugs and improving graphics a little …
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1 star: (0 - 5.75 in LDC) These levels need a lot of work. They're totally un-elaborated, and/or inherently flawed due to things like cutoff or enemy spam, or they're untested and there are too many bugs gameplay-wise, in short: Many many things went wrong in such a level.

2 stars: (6 - 9.75) These levels are not terrible, but poor. They're too short, lack scenery or they have errors and/or bugs but it's still barely enjoyable. Again, spend more effort and try to do better. (if it's your first level that I rate two stars, it's not bad. There's a long way you can still go)

3 stars: (10 - 12.75) These levels are about mediocre. They may be still a little bit short, the gameplay is fine but not very original and graphics are also solid, but not breath-taking. Try to keep improving!

4 stars: (13 - 15) These levels are nice, but not the best. Effort has been put into them, there can some professionality be seen in gameplay and graphics, they're a nice experience to play, but there are still things you can do to make it even better. Try to go the extra mile!

5 stars: (15.25 - 20) These are really great levels, those which, as said, I would give more than 15 in an LDC. These suffice many high requirements, and it already goes into subtleties if you want to make them better. These levels are successful all around. Bravo.

These are just general principles I try to follow when rating. Sometimes I don't leave a further comment when rating, most times I do, if you have questions about it, feel free to ask further.
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