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My first 25quared level I've ever made. It's a really dense forest that has stars of many different powers and whatnot. Collect the silver stars using the power of other stars to collect the shine sprite.

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Hey Vesoralla!
Congratulations on making your first 25quared level!
This level was nearly perfect in my eyes. It had almost all of the parts that make up a great level- Good decoration, great tile selection and placement, and a feel that you are actually in that scenario that you described. The only thing I think this level is lacking is danger. It doesn't really have very many enemies besides the Bullet Bills and the Thwomp, but that can still be just overlooked because of the amazing job you did with the visuals. Also add to that an perfect song for the level and you'll find yourself playing this level over and over again.

Something which I noticed though I'm sure you know of it too, is that for the silver star that's right above where you spawn there is a metal cage blocking it meaning you would normally have to get an invisibility cap and then get back there, but you put an invisibility cap under the tile. While this may not sound like a problem, it is because if you make Mario walk into the right side of this tile he will be able to actually defy the laws of physics and collect that cap even though there is a solid cage between it and him.

All in all I thought that you really did your best on this level so I'm giving you a 5/ 5, 'Till next time

~Nuclear_Blaze aka. The real Guardian to Glitch Castle

Wow, that was a really well-thought out comment.
Yeah, the lack of enemies: I had a bunch of them at first, but I got rid of some of them to reduce the lag. Besides, some of the enemy placements seemed unfair or just pointless except for the one's I left out.
I reckon some of those small details could be overlooked.
But yeah, thank you for that wonderful comment. You really expressed yourself there.

Whoa, not gonna lie, those graphics (in terms of tiles) felt ALL over the place... But the foliage balanced it out pretty well and made it flow. You fit a ton of gameplay and detail into a small space (you weren't lying about "really dense", lol), so nice job on that. Also, pretty good music choice. Could use a bit more of a danger/risk factor, but I'm not sure how that would be possible without changing the entire setting. Anyway, I won't rate because I'm pretty awful at placing things on relative scales in my mind and would probably end up just giving everything five stars (or maybe I just don't have enough experience), but I enjoyed this.

Good Gravy! This is an amazing level! I am amazed at all the foliage you have put in this level! And that genius trick with background. This is my first 5 star rating, and surely it belongs to you.
-A amazing amount of plants
-Tile variation
-Amazing use of moving blocks.
Sorry if this comment short, but that's how amazed I am at this level. Truly breathtaking.

It's not really that short of a comment. It's very expressive though. The "Good Gravy!" certainly shows some emotion.
I'm glad you thought the level was amazing. It's comments like these I should feel more appreciative of what I do. Thank you