Forest Valley Land-Phase 1

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Forest Valley Land-Phase 1

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Postby asdfmoviecaleb » April 3rd, 2016, 3:10 pm

Forest Valley Land-Phase 1
Part one of who knows of a sonic inspired series. I don't know why the level is so short, but i suspect it's because i'm very lazy. (new choice of music) Music: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jrmujm3SY5k

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Re: Forest Valley Land-Phase 1

Postby npromin1 » April 3rd, 2016, 3:32 pm

A pretty good level,but there are a few flaws. First,there's not many coins around. Second,the platforming doesn't match up. I don't know how to describe it,but the platforming is difficult,but the feel and mood of the level asks for you to relax. There's something that doesn't feel right about the platforming,but I don't think "difficult" is the ideal word to describe it with. Also,I couldn't see the cannon because of the trees,so I couldn't tell where Mario was going to be launched at.

Now for the good side of the level. The entrance is cool,the thing with the floating platforms and ice cubes is cool,the wide variety of decor used is cool. And I just loved how those mountain rocks went out of the grass and back in at the ceiling. The music choice was good,contributing to a calm mood of the level.
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Re: Forest Valley Land-Phase 1

Postby asdfmoviecaleb » April 3rd, 2016, 4:20 pm

npromin1 wrote:A pretty good level,but there are a few flaws. First,there's not many coins around. Second,the platforming doesn't match up. I don't know how to describe it,but the platforming is difficult,but the feel and mood of the level asks for you to relax. There's something that doesn't feel right about the platforming,but I don't think "difficult" is the ideal word to describe it with. Also,I couldn't see the cannon because of the trees,so I couldn't tell where Mario was going to be launched at.

Now for the good side of the level. The entrance is cool,the thing with the floating platforms and ice cubes is cool,the wide variety of decor used is cool. And I just loved how those mountain rocks went out of the grass and back in at the ceiling. The music choice was good,contributing to a calm mood of the level.

Okay. Wow. This review made me realize a few things.
1. Oh sh-t i forgot to place coins
2. I didn't really know what atmosphere I was going for in the level while i was making it, but i guess calming is kind of it.
3. If the mood was supposed to be calm, I chose the wrong music....
Im going to make a part 2 to this level, so anymore suggestions would be welcome
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