MGA:R Ep.4: Pyranati Desert

[sonicfan121901]

MGA:R Ep.4: Pyranati Desert
Time for Ep.4! I hope you guys Enjoy! Let me know what you think too Pleases I know what I can do to make it better!

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[DualFreezor07]

Gosh you are pumping out levels at a very fast pace.

EDIT: Just noticed that you're asking for suggestions, I'll say even though the levels are remastered, (I have a faint memory of playing these levels few years back) it is fairly simple in design and therefore rather bland. The cutoff on the sand area is clearly visible when you are being launched from the ship which doesn't look very nice but that's rather nitpicky. The fish pond in the middle of the sand looks kind of strange (wouldn't sand fall into the water?). And on the pyramid part, I think you are going for the idea of going inside the pyramid. But since you didn't have any background tile or door after you fall into the pyramid it feels like you went under the pyramid, gone behind the pyramid, went into the pipe and magically gets transported into the top of the pyramid with the shine spirit. I could argue you should spent more time on each level since they are rather short but hey, nothing wrong with short levels.

That's my thought on the level, meant to be constructive critique. Best of luck to the rest of the series and have fun!

[sonicfan121901]

Gosh you are pumping out levels at a very fast pace.

EDIT: Just noticed that you're asking for suggestions, I'll say even though the levels are remastered, (I have a faint memory of playing these levels few years back) it is fairly simple in design and therefore rather bland. The cutoff on the sand area is clearly visible when you are being launched from the ship which doesn't look very nice but that's rather nitpicky. The fish pond in the middle of the sand looks kind of strange (wouldn't sand fall into the water?). And on the pyramid part, I think you are going for the idea of going inside the pyramid. But since you didn't have any background tile or door after you fall into the pyramid it feels like you went under the pyramid, gone behind the pyramid, went into the pipe and magically gets transported into the top of the pyramid with the shine spirit. I could argue you should spent more time on each level since they are rather short but hey, nothing wrong with short levels.

That's my thought on the level, meant to be constructive critique. Best of luck to the rest of the series and have fun!

Thanks for the feedback and sorry for taking
A long to respond I was on vacation and I was trying to make it so that ground look nice and the water was my effort of a "mirage" and I tried my best and making the Pyramid dungeon look right but I tried... Also if want to I still have the old version of the series still in my portal list so you can play the old one (I think the first 2 are on the old Mario 63 portal)