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The right way
This is my first level. You have to find the way to go to the shine...

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This level isn't very good.

CONS

First of all, it needs more scenery in order for it to look nicer. The only scenery you put was when you get the silver star.
There is two clocks and a no-warp Warp Pipe for no reason on the second scene.
And it needs some enemies and obstacles to make it a real challenge.

PROS

At least you avoided cutoffs. I will give you that.

My final rating: 1/5

FINAL NOTE: Work on adding scenery, obstacles, and enemies. And don't put random stuff in future levels for no reason.

No, there's plenty more wrong with this level than cutoff or little scenery. It's essentially Pick-A-Door, which isn't a fun game to play. It's luck based, which requires no skill to play and only causes frustration. The first pipe is just a troll. It adds nothing but frustration to the level. There's a pipe under the sling star, which is never told to the player. I had to go into the editor to see how to get the shine. This may sound very harsh, but this is a definite 1 star.

Awesomeguy's right. Next time, don't make levels like this. Trust me, it's NOT fun like you believe.