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Eruption - Enterance

PostPosted: October 23rd, 2016, 12:28 pm
by superdrew12
Eruption - Enterance
A series I might continue. It's a collection hunt: go around in the Eruption world and collect 9 red coins.

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Re: Eruption - Enterance

PostPosted: October 25th, 2016, 5:58 am
by SSGSS_Gogeta
Hey, I was going to give some feedback to this level:

Pros:
- It was a creative idea
- Had some challenge to it

Cons:
- Some spinning platforms were too fast and were hard to use (not a great challenge tactic IMO)
- Some tiles and textures weren't appropriate for the stage
- Maybe a little music change may help (Maybe Lethal Lava Land or FLoater Land may have worked better IMO)
- Barren of enemies (apart from the big bully)

If this is your first stage then it was a good try, if this isn't your first stage then watch the "super mario 63 level designer tips" video on YouTube