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Shine Cavern

PostPosted: November 17th, 2016, 12:07 pm
by Dubster108
Shine Cavern
The Shine Cavern is home to some dangerous enemies... and some great Rewards!

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Re: Shine Cavern

PostPosted: November 17th, 2016, 4:53 pm
by Forgotten
That was an okay level. The tile and item placements are nicely done here, although even with three shine sprites, it's still too short. It could've been way longer than that (BTW, you can change the level's size, as I see you have the default size here). 3 stars.

Re: Shine Cavern

PostPosted: November 18th, 2016, 2:32 am
by John
Forgotten wrote:The tile and item placements are nicely done here, although even with three shine sprites, it's still too short. It could've been way longer than that.

Yes, the vegetations are put nicely. But it's unnecessary to put a block switch, you can go through with Hover FLUDD.
The same as your "63 silver stars in space" level, there can be a chellenge here like fight against Big Bully.
Final rating:3/5 stars.

Re: Shine Cavern

PostPosted: November 19th, 2016, 9:17 am
by Jumbo101
A very short and easy level. I've found the decor was pleasant to see, but I think it would've been nice to make the level size more bigger. It would also be nice to have some challenge. It's alright, I'll give it 3/5.

Re: Shine Cavern

PostPosted: November 20th, 2016, 9:43 am
by That One Goat
This level was pretty short and to be honest that's fine. But after playing a couple times I found that it only takes ten seconds each to get each shine. (Maybe it's a little to short)

One way to make it longer is you could have made each shine sprite a silver star or red coin. That would be my suggestion besides just increasing the size and adding more stuff.

Anyway this level was actually pretty fun considering it looked nice and had a good amount of enemies. It's only fault is the it's length.

That being said I'm rating this level a 3/5. Good work.