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Eruption - Snowflake City

PostPosted: November 20th, 2016, 2:19 pm
by superdrew12
Eruption - Snowflake City
Another "Eruption" creation. Collect 3 stars in the abandoned city of Snowflake City!

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Re: Eruption - Snowflake City

PostPosted: November 29th, 2016, 5:42 am
by John
Kek... An interesting level. Here are some suggestions for you.
-Try to put corner tiles and wall tiles (Like 7-16 in Snow Tile Sets) to make the level more beautiful.
-It's unnecessary to put so many falling logs in the sky. And the Circle platforms' speed are too fast. It will be better if you reduce the speed.
-You use castle tiles to make a wall. Do you know you can walk through the tiles?
-It's unnecessary to put a switch and a cannon.
-You can press "Ctrl" button to suap the items into 8*8 grid.
Anyway, your second level is not bad. 2/5 stars instead of 1.5/5 stars. Hope you can make your level better.