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the sprite land

PostPosted: December 1st, 2016, 9:52 am
by potato243
the sprite land
hi

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Re: the sprite land

PostPosted: December 2nd, 2016, 5:18 am
by 0ject1
This is a great level (as gameplay) but you have A LOT of cuttof. Try imagining that level like real life, and you'll find WHAT ARE THE LOTS of details you missed.
I'll be good and rate 2 stars, but instead of telling "PLS GVM 5 STARS ON MY LEVEL", you can try to upgrade your Designer Skills.
Anyways... well, i'll rate your level on each subject:
Gameplay: 4
Cuttof: LOTS OF CUTTOF!

Spend a bigger time on the LD and you may be better!

Posted by 0bject1