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Postby superdrew12 » December 3rd, 2016, 7:55 am

Navy Bombardment
I made a level where you literally attack an air ship. Kind of like the end of Super Mario 3, if you ask me...

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Re: Navy Bombardment

Postby John » December 8th, 2016, 3:14 am

A chellenging level. Here are some advices to you.
-Tiling is good. Keep it up.
-Your level is a little laggy. There should be some level transitions. (See No.43 item in the first lane)-
-You can push "Ctrl" button to snap itens into 8*8 grid.-
-The Y size is too big. 150 is unnecessary, because it is empty above the airship.-
-There can be more kinds of enemies but not only Big Bullies, Koopas.-
Except these disadvantages, this level is still good. 3/5 stars for you.

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