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Andrew Adventure

PostPosted: January 18th, 2017, 1:38 pm
by andrewmac1111
Andrew Adventure
This is My Level i build!

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Re: Andrew Adventure

PostPosted: January 22nd, 2017, 10:06 am
by Maaaaarrrrriiiiio
Give an unofficial overview:
All points 100
Difficulty: 5/20(too easy)
graphics:10/10(excellent)
In-game playing:15/40(unnessesary power-ups-15, unnessesary monsters-10)
other: 10/30(ok use of items 5/10, cut-offs-15)
total:40/100
My star rating: 2/5
My comments: You can try to add different kinds of tiles to make this level no cut-offs, and don't add the power-ups at the beginning, it makes your level too easy.

Re: Andrew Adventure

PostPosted: January 22nd, 2017, 7:04 pm
by John
It seems that the bottom of your level is unnecessary. You can remove it. And ......
maaaaarrrrriiiiio wrote:other: 10/30(ok use of items 5/10, cut-offs-15)

There are truly many cut-offs in your level. For example, you can add No.9,10,15,16,38,39,44,45 and 37 jungle tiles in you level.
The gameplaying isn't bad. 2/5 stars for you.