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Bowser's illusion castle

PostPosted: March 22nd, 2017, 5:57 am
by AreaxisSM63
Bowser's illusion castle
Hello and welcome to my new series! Yeah.. I lost my old account and now I am using this and also this level is kinda poorly made so please don't judge me. Anyway, be ready to join Mario and his friends to an epic adventure in the scorching heat of the deserts! Hope you guys enjoy it and please rate!

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Re: Bowser's illusion castle

PostPosted: March 22nd, 2017, 11:04 pm
by ToniczeHedgefox
It's a great level with an interesting story, despite it being told in a billion signs, but I'm fine with it. I felt by the middle part of the level you kinda ran out of ideas or started putting together random obstacles. It's a fair challenge, but doesn't fit with the overall desert theme, except that one tree that acts as a platform. I'll be waiting for the second part.

Re: Bowser's illusion castle

PostPosted: March 23rd, 2017, 3:08 am
by AreaxisSM63
ToniczeHedgefox wrote:It's a great level with an interesting story, despite it being told in a billion signs, but I'm fine with it. I felt by the middle part of the level you kinda ran out of ideas or started putting together random obstacles. It's a fair challenge, but doesn't fit with the overall desert theme, except that one tree that acts as a platform. I'll be waiting for the second part.

yeah originally it was suppose the be the Secret Course #2 music but I changed it back to desert theme, i guess i better think better next time lol, and surely the next is gonna be far better but since i got school to deal with, it won't be coming very soon, but I'll try my best

Re: Bowser's illusion castle

PostPosted: March 23rd, 2017, 3:54 am
by John
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Now may I judge this level a bit? Generally, a level with interesting storyline can easily get high score.
Level quality (1/5 star): This level is neither too hard nor too easy, and the graphics is pretty good (30 fps on my computer)! |+1 star|
In-game playing (2/5 stars): Enjoyable storyline,|+2 stars| and the whole level is not boring at all, pretty tilesets.|+1 stars| But the flying part is hard, I tried a few times to pass it. I think mario shouldn't go die when he doesn't fly onto the cloud. |-1 star|
Other (2/5 stars): Tiles do not fit theme (Why ice blocks appear in the desert?), |-1 star| No Cut-offs,|+1 star| and a warm hint: You can press "ctrl" button when placing items. It can snap items into 8*8 grid to make the level more ordered. |0 star, it's free|
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Final rating: 3/5 stars. Just remember that make tour level fit theme. Keep on making storyline and you can post level series on this site:

SM63 Level Series

Of yeah, I understand you ,I am a schoolboy, too. I can hardly go online. We are looking forward to your next post!

Re: Bowser's illusion castle

PostPosted: March 23rd, 2017, 5:07 am
by AreaxisSM63
John wrote:Welcome back! Have you found your missing level? If you have found it, post a level collcetion topic to show your levels to us!

SM63 Level Collections

Now may I judge this level a bit? Generally, a level with interesting storyline can easily get high score.
Level quality (1/5 star): This level is neither too hard nor too easy, and the graphics is pretty good (30 fps on my computer)! |+1 star|
In-game playing (2/5 stars): Enjoyable storyline,|+2 stars| and the whole level is not boring at all, pretty tilesets.|+1 stars| But the flying part is hard, I tried a few times to pass it. I think mario shouldn't go die when he doesn't fly onto the cloud. |-1 star|
Other (2/5 stars): Tiles do not fit theme (Why ice blocks appear in the desert?), |-1 star| No Cut-offs,|+1 star| and a warm hint: You can press "ctrl" button when placing items. It can snap items into 8*8 grid to make the level more ordered. |0 star, it's free|
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Final rating: 3/5 stars. Just remember that make tour level fit theme. Keep on making storyline and you can post level series on this site:

SM63 Level Series

Of yeah, I understand you ,I am a schoolboy, too. I can hardly go online. We are looking forward to your next post!

There was an ice block? nope, that was for the window incase you had common sense there (no offense), plus yeah, i had no time left to make the rest of the level so it got a little boring and bad but next time i'll try better (why judge me ;-;)

Re: Bowser's illusion castle

PostPosted: March 23rd, 2017, 6:01 am
by John
AreaxisSM63 wrote:There was an ice block? nope, that was for the window incase you had common sense there (no offense), plus yeah, i had no time left to make the rest of the level so it got a little boring and bad but next time i'll try better (why judge me ;-;)

I never think this is a bad level that we can't judge it. It is pretty good. And I understand you that you have a little time to create levels. Just do your best.
And I finally know why you put a ice ( actually it's glass ) in your level. It's my fault.
You can see, as a newcomer more than a year, my level was not good yet. Just explore the LD and you will make excellent levels! :)

Re: Bowser's illusion castle

PostPosted: March 23rd, 2017, 6:34 am
by Vajrin
Quite good level but platforming and graphics can be improved (such floating signs and flying section). 3/5 stars.

Re: Bowser's illusion castle

PostPosted: March 23rd, 2017, 2:35 pm
by Maaaaarrrrriiiiio
Give an unofficial overview:
All points 100
Difficulty: 20/20(easy-medium, suitable for almost every player)
Graphics: 10/10(excellent, around 30 fps)
In-game playing: 28/40(The gameplay can almost get full score 38/40, and I don't know why you set up a fludd for "suck at sudoku" purposes, because this level pretty much has got nothing to do with sudoku.. sry but -10)
Other: 18/30(not reeally good at using tiles, you can really work more on graphics 5/15, same goes for the item uses 5/15. And.. Awesome storyline +8 extra points!)
Total: 76/100
My star rating: 4/5
My comment: This is a fairly good level with good storyline. Just work on graphics more to make the level more pretty, and that will make a 5 star level. I am looking forward to the part 2, good job on this!