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Amnezia
Help the narrator recall his memory by collecting the shine sprite bowser left. A short level by 0ject1 (and his first).

Story:
We are in the smallest town ever, Natatakato. Suddenly, a war beetwen Natatakato and bowser started. After the town was annihilated, the few survivors died because of the lava. However, only one didn't die. His name was The Narrator.

50 years later, Mario visits the town and decides to help The Narrator regain his memory with a very small price: a shine sprite.

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You should add Level Transitions in the places where you've sectioned off parts of the level with giant walls. This will make your level much less laggy and more fun. Other than that, this level is pretty okay, if a bit simple. I'm looking forward to seeing what you create in the future.

Give an unofficial overview:
All points 100
Level difficulty: 20/20(easy-medium)
Graphics: 8/10 good(some parts 20fps)
In-Game playing: 20/40(okay-good)
Other: 16/30(fair use of tiles 9/15, okay use of items 7/15. Add more transitions please? that will give you more points)
Total: 64/100
My Star rating:3/5
My Comment: This level is fairly good. Although it has a little graphic problems, it does give a fair gameplaying. And, agreed with KABOOM, you could add one more trahsition to the level, that will give you to at least 4 stars.
_{Also I think this is actually your second level}

It's a traditional kind of lava level. I'm fine with most of the level. Its actually pretty good, solid platforming. My main complaint is that the level suffers from not having transitions. It makes it lag, and on my computer, the level runs at about 15 fps consistently. The story seemed kind of cliched, and didn't affect the level much at all. Overall, its3/5 stars.