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Postby Sebastian2779 » June 25th, 2017, 12:56 pm

Legend of the Rainbow Sprites|Chapter 1 1
Here is a story about the Rainbow Sprites, the guardians of the rainbow...

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Re: Legend of the Rainbow Sprites|Chapter 1 1

Postby John » June 30th, 2017, 8:38 pm

Here is a overview:
Lavel quality: This level is not very hard, and in my computer it is 30 fps. |+1 star|
In-game playing: Great storyline! |+1 star| But this level is too simple that I can't enjoy it. Try to put more kinds of items such as moving platforms and blocks but not just Bullet Bills and flame towers. If you do this, I suggest you should disable some of them.|-1 star| And there are only some vegatations at the beginning. There should be more vegatations.
Others: | First you get 2 stars| I think the warp pipe at the beginning is unnecessary and we can even jump over the gate.|-1 star| And you can press "Control" to make items more ordered.
Final rating: 2/5 stars. Work hard on the in-game playing and make the level more interesting.
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1.Level Quality: (25/100 points): Include level diffculty, graphics and the designing of the level. If a level is so hard or laggy that I can't pass this star will immediately be lost. And if a level is so easy that I can EASILY pass it, I'll cost scores according to the circumstances.
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Re: Legend of the Rainbow Sprites|Chapter 1 1

Postby Maaaaarrrrriiiiio » July 1st, 2017, 4:24 am

I dont think this level is anything besides heavy storylines.(even then, the storylines were very short)
But the storylines were very well made.
I think you could add more difficulty to this level. 2/5 stars.
Btw John,
Sebastian actually spent a few days tryin to make this level XD
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I give every level a overview with a total of 100 points.
1. Difficulty(20 points): I will take points off depending on how far has the level been beyond easy or hard. But generally, most of the levels should get full points on this.
2. Graphics(10 points): I will take points off depending on how laggy this level is. Again, generally, most of the levels should get full points on this.
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>25 fps: 10/10
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15-20 fps:1-5/10
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3. In-game playing(40 points): This score shows how fun, playable and unique this level is.
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30-40:excellent
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4. Other(30 points):I will give points on this depending on how well does the level use the tiles and items(15 points each).And all points from special rules are added here.
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50-69/100:3☆
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Re: Legend of the Rainbow Sprites|Chapter 1 1

Postby John » July 1st, 2017, 10:42 pm

Maaaaarrrrriiiiio wrote:Btw John,
Sebastian actually spent a few days tryin to make this level XD

This sentence just mean we should put a heart into it and we can make excellent levels.
A good level is never bad, and nobody will give this level the lowest rating.

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My rating standards: show
I have rated so many levels but I didn't obey any rules. Here is my own rating standard. ( New judging standards! )


I'll give each level an unoffical overview with 100 points in total.


1.Level Quality: (25/100 points): Include level diffculty, graphics and the designing of the level. If a level is so hard or laggy that I can't pass this star will immediately be lost. And if a level is so easy that I can EASILY pass it, I'll cost scores according to the circumstances.
How to judge if a level is laggy:

FPS: 26+: Good.
FPS: 20-26: Not very good, but it can be accepted.
FPS: 14-20: Bad.
FPS: 14-: Terrible, I can't stand!

Here is a tutorial that can prevent a "laggy" level:Why is a Level Laggy?
Tutorial that can make better text in LD: Coming Soon!


2.In-game playing: (45/100 points): Include level decoration, the use of tiles. And if this level is interesting, fascinating and chellenging, etc.


3.Other (30/100 points): Mistakes, bugs and warm tips. If there is any bugs that can't let me pass the level, I'll reduce a lot of points..


Final rating:
0-29 = 1 star
25-59 = 2 stars
60-74 = 3 stars
75-84 = 4 stars
85-100 = 5 stars


I'll continue updating these rules and I'll use these rules to rate levels.
Upcoming levels: show
The Secret Room 2
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