Inside the space

[Batcher1101]

Inside the space
This is my VERY first game, i was getting these star coins and getting all the textures . Enjoy!

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[Asterocrat]

Hi there! Since this is your first level, and because I've seen you in the Discord chat, allow me to give your level a proper review, like we do around here. We tend to give a score to levels by grading them in 3 categories: Gameplay, Graphics and Misc.

Gameplay: Level is short, which is to be expected from a first level. However, the little amount of gameplay showcased in it is diverse (rotating platforms, tipping logs, FLUDD platforming), which is always nice. Having diverse challanges in your level (especially when that level is long) keeps it from becoming boring. Enemy placement was fair. The level's difficulty was low but that's mostly due to its shortness.
-- 6/10

Graphics: One major plus I noted from your level is that cut-off (which is the name we gave to graphical errors such as these) is nowhere to be seen. However I can't help but notice your level is devoid of any decorative items, like trees or rocks. While these are purely optional, they often contribute to a level's atmosphere and makes it come alive. I recommend you mess around with them in your future levels.
-- 2/5

Misc: There is not much else to note about your level. All I can say is that using coins to guide the player (like you did in this level) will come handy when developing larger levels. Likewise, adding secrets (in the form of 1-ups in your case) encourages the player to explore and is rewarding, so I can only advise you to keep doing that.
-- 3/5

So in overall, I would rate this level 11/20. I might have been a bit generous, but there certainly is potential hidden in that simple level. All I can suggest you to do is keep making more levels, but most of all, be ambitious: don't be afraid to make larger levels (they can be as wide as 999 tiles long!), and to experiment with decoration (go crazy with dem trees!). And hey, who knows, if you have any questions, feel free to ask me via PM or in the chat!

11/20 would translates to 3 stars, but have an extra star of encouragement ;) 4 stars.