Legend Of Zelda - Oracle Of Fear

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Legend Of Zelda - Oracle Of Fear

Postby TrappedTime » March 21st, 2010, 8:05 am

This is an original storyline created and owned by TBG.

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Alam KamShe[Alam-Kawm-Shay] gives birth to a very beautiful baby. But suddinly the room blacks out and a pink aura surrounds the baby as she floats into the air. The aura then turns red, then white, then back to pink and the baby slowly falls back into Alam's lap.
No one knows what just happened until years later, when Adrenon[Ay-dreh-nawn] is able to speak.
She talks about being able to switch between Heaven, Earth, and Hell. She's always happy because everywhere she goes, everyone accepts her.
But one day, a gloomy one, a lightning bolt struck the girl and she disappeared.
Down in hell she appeared unwillingly.
She can no longer pass into Earth nor Heaven.
But what she forgot was that no matter who the person is, everyone has two sides.
A being side and a looking side.
Looks can never be taken away, that's the special part.

So the Devil devised a plan to take the Golden Star Rod by using Adrenon.
Adrenon thought she deserved something too though.

She passed into Heaven, passing through security.
She asks God where the Golden Star Rod is and he shows her. Adrenon grabs it and another thing and disappears.

But when passing through Earth's level she dropped that one item, the PortKey[I couldn't think of any other name for it...]
The Devil turns Heaven into a firey pit of doom, holding God captive in Hell.

Link, comes along the PortKey and starts waving it around.
He then pops into Heaven, an he jumps back into the portal he made and back into Earth.

Link discovers that he could use it to go into Hell and save God.
The adventure begins.

[Adrenon, she will try to stop Link three times throught the storyline, but fails each time.]

-I need help with the storyline because I don't know how to continue this[I'm planning on this being made into a game some day].
Anybody got any ideas?
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Re: Legend Of Zelda - Oracle Of Fear

Postby Zunar » March 21st, 2010, 8:30 am

Well, the devil couldn't REALLY hold God captive, Adrenon couldn't REALLY steal a Golden Star Rod, and nobody REALLY could pass between Heaven, Earth, and Hell.


But I say 7/10 so far.
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Re: Legend Of Zelda - Oracle Of Fear

Postby Buff_ » March 21st, 2010, 9:26 am

Meh, 5/10. Not really explained and spelling errors. You should watch out for those.
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Re: Legend Of Zelda - Oracle Of Fear

Postby TrappedTime » March 21st, 2010, 10:07 am

I forgot to mention.
When the Devil holds the Golden Star Rod it's called the "Ruby Skull Scepter".

But do you have any ideas on like how to place stuff in each world?
And in which order Link gets certain items?

I need some help plz.
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