Mario's Big Adventure: The Shadow Ghosts Attack

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OK so I made up a story that me and my brother, Python made up.
I'm working on chapters and it will be good I promise.
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Chapter 1: The Party

One day, Mario was on his way to the Princess's house. He saw the castle up ahead.
"Oh Boy!" Mario exclaimed, as he ran towards the doorstep. *knock knock*

"Hello?" a voice asked. It was Princess Peach. She was standing right in front of Mario with a couple Toads beside her.
"Hi Mario!" Eddie said gleefully."We've been waiting for you!" Mario followed the toads and they entered a big room with cake and balloons.

"SURPRISE!!!" everyone yelled. Mario was shocked. He'd never seen anything so better than a party for him.- but he had been to so many parties! He was given a gift. It was a glowing, spooky necklace that seemed to have powers.When it was time to go home, Mario thanked them for the party. He put his necklace on and walked on home.
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Chapter 2: The Necklace
When Mario woke up, he was happy! But then Bowser's Ship came to take over the Mushroom Kingdom, Mario was ready! Mario expected to be fighting Koopas, but instead, found black, ghosts that look nothing like boos.

"M@Rl0!"One one the creepy creatures said his name!!
"(0M3 Wltl-l U5, M@Rl0!"
"What?" Mario asked. "What did you say??"
"...."
Silence. Nothing happened. Then Bowser came out of his ship.
"Hey buddy!"said Bowser, with a evil grin on his face."I've see you've met my new men!"
"What?"Mario asked. He was confused.
" You see, these ghosts are called 'Shadow Ghosts'. They can transform or possess the body of a being, animal or human"
"Huh?"
"The necklace Peach gave you, it is a sacred necklace that's so powerful, that you can walk through walls, get immune to bullets and stuff like that!" he explained.
"You were stalking me?" Mario asked.
"NO!!!" Bowser seemed mad."Well guess what? Since you have the powerful necklace,that means we need you!"
The creepy ghosts started to talk again."(0M3 J0lN U5!!"
"NO!!!" Mario used the necklace to run as fast as he could!
"Capture him!!" Bowser ordered! The ghosts chased Mario until they reached Mario's House...
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Chapter 3: The Koopa Squad Team

Coming Soon...

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[Blablob]

Huh....it doesn't look very interesting right now. Not much going on. But keep writing; I'll look into it in the future.

[Ridder]

No, it's not interesting......

So, the first paragraph is about absolutely nothing but a party, which is never looked in to that far, and a necklace.
wait, did I say First Paragraph? I meant first chapter, yes, that's all there is to the first chapter, kind of dull, wouldn't you say?

Then the second paragraph/chapter is about Bowser coming out of nowhere, into nowhere (Remember how you don't explain the setting, the time, the area, ANYTHING?), conveniently explaining everything about the necklace, well, actually, explaining Mario can walk through walls, be bullet proof, and "Stuff like that."

The mere title "Mario's Big Adventure" is so cheesy, it's good enough to drive anyone who wants to read this story away, Kirby_999, this was a faleur on your part.
Plus, did you really have to "Reserve" so many posts for a story with chapters consisting of a single paragraph? How many Chapters do you plan on making? 63? 81? 300?