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super mario 65

Postby Sonicfan253 » January 8th, 2010, 3:39 pm

PROLOGUE

after super mario 63, mario was resting for awhile. Taking a vacation away from bowser,

Eddie: Mario!-mario?-hey mario!
Mario: a-what is it eddie?
Eddie: there is something wrong with the shine sprite orb!
Mario: well then lets-ago!

IN THE CASTLE

Eddie: mario, this isnt good. The shine sprite orb is not glowing anymore!
*earthquake triggers*
Mario: huh? whats-a going on here?
Eddie: oh no! the shine sprite orb is cracking!
*shine sprite orb breaks and shine sprites fly everywhere*
Eddie: this is not good! without the shine sprite orb, the castle will be out of control!
Mario: huh? we are flying!
Eddie: *looks out princess peach window* uh oh........
*castle breaks into 6 pieces*
Eddie: Ahhhhhhhhhhh mario help me!
*mario gets sucked up into a cloud and eddie gets sucked up by a black hole with the other toads*

END OF PROLOGUE


CHAPTER 1
The remaining toad

Mario: where am I?
Jeremy (a toad): I dont know either!
Mario: jeremy? you survived?
Jeremy: yes, when the toads got sucked up, I got seperated from them.
Mario: some toads didnt get sucked up, so they are in the pieces of the castle.
Jeremy: oh man, when peach comes back shes gonna be so scared.
Mario: *gasp* I FORGOT ABOUT PEACH!
Jeremy: she is in the final peice of the castle! we need to find her!
*mario and jeremy walk along the clouds*
Jeremy: wow, its nice up here
Mario: a-I agree jeremy,
Mario: oh look! a shine sprite!
Jeremy: mario grab it!
*mario grabs the shine sprite and cool music plays*
Jeremy: is the music really necisary?
Mario: I dunno
Mario: we need to find max he could help us build a plane to find the toads
Jeremy: I think hes at Dako ruins.
Mario: Dako ruins is the new painting that peach put up, if we find the base of the castle. then we can enter that painting.
Mario: lets-ago!

CHAPTER 2
Meeting FLUDD

mario and jeremy have headed out to find the first piece of the castle,

Mario: hey jeremy do you know where your going?
Jeremy: uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh no.
Mario: look its a F.L.U.D.D! maybe he could give us some derections?
Jeremy: yeah! I heard F.L.U.D.Ds are very smart.
(I dont want to type F.L.U.D.D so lets just call him FLUDD ok?)
Mario: ima gonna open FLUDD`s box now
Jeremy: ok
Mario: *puts FLUDD on back* now we are ready!
FLUDD: mario? is that you? your the one that collects shine sprites!
Mario: yes I am, but the shine sprite orb is broken again! and the castle broke into pieces!
FLUDD: sounds like your in alot of trouble, as always :lol:
Jeremy: well are we goig to get a move on or what?
Mario: dont be so impatient jeremy. We need to ask FLUDD some more questions
FLUDD: WHAT?! im a water jetpack not a calculator!
Jeremy: *snickers* then do you mind if we use you to float up into that black hole?
FLUDD: I guess. But you need alot of blue coins to fly me up there!
Mario: sure thing FLUDD
Jeremy: *hops on marios back*
Mario: OOF!
Fludd: owch! not so hard jeremy!
Mario: well its time to fly! *flys with FLUDD up into the sky*

And so, mario flew with FLUDD. collecting blue coins on the way, but when they got to the black hole and saw....
What did they see? is it bad? or worse, is it bowser?

Chapter 3
Metal mario returns.
Mario: oh no! its metal mario!
Metal mario: I told you earlier mario, IM the REAL mario!
FLUDD: Oh no! I remember him from Deflino Island!
Jeremy: ummm....who exactly is this guy?
Mario: an evil version of me
Metal mario: I cant let you reach the castle! master Bowser says so!
Fludd: we have no choice then......SHINE SPRITE BLAST!!!!
*Fludd shoots out a super blast of water, blowing everything away*
Metal mario: Pathetic! I`ll be back you insects!
Mario and jeremy blast into the black hole.
Jeremy: We are in a world now! we have reached Bomb-omb battlefield.
FLUDD: and king bomb-omb is at the top?
Mario: yeah! *nods* letsa-go battle King bomb-omb!
Jeremy, mario, and FLUDD climbed up the mountain, avoiding alot of goombas.
Xavier (a toad): help me!
FLUDD: Xavier? how did you get trapped in a cage?
Xavier: the Koopa Koopa Bandits threw me into this cage!
Mario: the Koopa Koopa Bandits?
Xavier: Yes! please help?
FLUDD: how?
Xavier: I think king bomb-omb has a piece of the castle floating above him, and he has the key to this cage!
Mario: then lets go beat up King bomb-omb.
<><><><><>AT THE BOSS<><><><><>
King bomb-omb: NO! I will never let you get my piece of the castle!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Jeremy: GIVEITKINGBOMBOMB!
Mario: jeremy calm down! the only way to get it is to FORCE him to give it to us!
FLUDD: but master mario! how will we do it?
Mario: First, fludd will switch into Turbo Fludd. then, I will run around KBO (king bomb-omb) and make him dizzy!
Jeremy: nice plan! while KBO is dizzy, I will throw bomb-ombs at him.
FLUDD: perfect! SWITCHING INTO TURBO FLUDD
KBO: you will never win against me!
-----------------------------------------------A few minutes later-------------------------------------------
KBO: ah! you beat me again! *KABOOM!*
Mario: our work is done! time to save Xavier and get into the castle......
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