The Adventures of Scardysquaril

[JSlayerXero]

Wow. I can't tell which is worse, RW part 2, or this. Actually, screw that, at least RW Part 2 wasn't so... Random. It screwed with your head on a regular basis, and constantly tried to outdo itself, but it wasn't out-right random. But I can see a similarity in the vague actions department.

There are constant, and I do mean constant time lapses. Mounds of the stuff. Not only that, but there's a serious lack of character development. (I would know) Take Ridder's advice, don't make a sequel. This is useful as a milestone, if it even is one, but that's about it.

Bloody murder. I'd actually put this into the same boat as RW part 1. That was made on TNES. Believe me on this one, that's not a positive comparison.

[ScardySquaril]

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Some of these comments actually kinda hurt my feeling

[MessengerOfDreams]

It's called Constructive Criticism, sport. And it's also necessary. This story blew, but it had those little tidbits of 'maybe this kid can write.' So practice, but either way, this was necessarily panned.