Why not Fukkireta?

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Its a clear, sunny day, and kids are out having fun on the field, playing with soccer balls and footballs and the like. But Cheita(chee-ta) is all alone sitting on the side, and frowning. Then Condetah (Kon-DET-eh), who is very sociable, scholarly, and adventurous comes up and asks her, "Why not Fukkireta?"

"Chapter One, Pt 1": show

"What the heck is fukkireta?"
"Fukkireta, you know, enjoy yourself, have fun, relieve your stress, get rid of worries, stuff like that."
"I'd rather not."
"come on, it'll be fun"
Condetah then grabbed Cheita by the arm and took her over to a shady tree at the edge of the field, which, at a distance seems, impossible to get into. Condetah then crawled into the tree. He turned around and asked, "Come on, you won't get hurt."
"Fine. But I won't like it"
Condetah pulled a deck of cards out of his pocket and said "You know how to play any card games?"

"as a matter of fact, i do."
"which ones?"
"i know War and Speed. i know others, but they aren't playable with two people."
"Then lets play speed. i dont know how to play that, and want to learn. Teach me please."

"Chapter 1 pt 2": show

So Cheita taught Condetah how to play Speed, and then they played a few rounds. They soon had to go home.
“I’ll see you tomorrow…”Said Condetah,”oh, I almost forgot to ask. What is your name?”
“It’s Cheita, and I don’t have anything else to do tomorrow, so I guess I’ll see you then.”
"By the way, my name is Condetah."
Both of them went to their houses. When Cheita got home, she wrote in her thought journal:
today was okay, one of my better days since my brothers and sisters died, which was a few months ago. Well, I got something to do tomorrow instead of my normal wallowing and sitting…
who knows, i might even have some fun. I actually don't dread tomorrow, which is rare.
Condetah, when he got home, he thought:
I found a new friend today, one who can help teach me as much as I can help teach them. I've always been a happy, stress-free kid, young and playful, parents not expecting too much of me, living a nice life, but I always wondered what can cause people to seclude themselves and recede from their social life.

”chapter 2 pt 1”: show

The next day, Condetah went and found Cheita at the beginning of the afternoon, right after they got out of school.
“I wasn’t expecting to see you this early!” said Cheita, with a tinge of surprise.
“well, we where going to meet today, right?”
“Yeah, but I still need to eat a snack first.”
So they sat down and ate together. Condetah then asked Cheita, “I wonder, why are you so sad?”

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