Mario Magic Tower Quest

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Re: Mario Magic Tower Quest

Postby Megar » April 12th, 2010, 12:26 pm

Do Stuff Like this: (First Part as Story)
When Mario was Just Baby Mario, The Stork, (Yoshi's Island) told him to go to the Magic Tower.
In the Mushroom Kingdom, Goomba Road No.1, Mario's Pad.
12:00 Noon

The Stork Entered Baby Mario's Room And said, "I've told you that you need to go to the Magic Tower Today!"
Baby Mario kept on Sleeping. The Stork got a bit angry then. "WAKE UP!" He shouted.
"Let me sleep for another hour..." He whispered to The Stork.
"Before one hour, you've said that you need to sleep one hour, I will not believe you!" The Stork Snapped.
The Stork Took out a Whip to smack Baby Mario.
"WEH!WEH!" Baby Mario yelped. "WHAT WAS THAT FOR!"
"I told you to wake up...." The Stork Said to Baby Mario, as if nothing happened.
"Ok..." Baby Mario whispered to The Stork.
Baby Mario walked to the bathroom to wash his face, brush his teeth and pee in the toilet. :lol:
The Stork didn't like the smell inside the bathroom. "Why you still in your toilet? Change your clothes! You need to eat lunch now!" He shouted.

That's what GOOD story tellers would write.
Overall, 1/10 for atleast tring.
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Re: Mario Magic Tower Quest

Postby Blablob » April 12th, 2010, 12:32 pm

SuperSpongerific wrote:Do Stuff Like this: (First Part as Story)
When Mario was Just Baby Mario, The Stork, (Yoshi's Island) told him to go to the Magic Tower.
In the Mushroom Kingdom, Goomba Road No.1, Mario's Pad.
12:00 Noon

The Stork Entered Baby Mario's Room And said, "I've told you that you need to go to the Magic Tower Today!"
Baby Mario kept on Sleeping. The Stork got a bit angry then. "WAKE UP!" He shouted.
"Let me sleep for another hour..." He whispered to The Stork.
"Before one hour, you've said that you need to sleep one hour, I will not believe you!" The Stork Snapped.
The Stork Took out a Whip to smack Baby Mario.
"WEH!WEH!" Baby Mario yelped. "WHAT WAS THAT FOR!"
"I told you to wake up...." The Stork Said to Baby Mario, as if nothing happened.
"Ok..." Baby Mario whispered to The Stork.
Baby Mario walked to the bathroom to wash his face, brush his teeth and pee in the toilet. :lol:
The Stork didn't like the smell inside the bathroom. "Why you still in your toilet? Change your clothes! You need to eat lunch now!" He shouted.

That's what GOOD story tellers would write.
Overall, 1/10 for atleast tring.


You're saying GOOD story writers would say that? I beg to differ.
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Re: Mario Magic Tower Quest

Postby Megar » April 13th, 2010, 8:28 am

blablob wrote:
SuperSpongerific wrote:Do Stuff Like this: (First Part as Story)
When Mario was Just Baby Mario, The Stork, (Yoshi's Island) told him to go to the Magic Tower.
In the Mushroom Kingdom, Goomba Road No.1, Mario's Pad.
12:00 Noon

The Stork Entered Baby Mario's Room And said, "I've told you that you need to go to the Magic Tower Today!"
Baby Mario kept on Sleeping. The Stork got a bit angry then. "WAKE UP!" He shouted.
"Let me sleep for another hour..." He whispered to The Stork.
"Before one hour, you've said that you need to sleep one hour, I will not believe you!" The Stork Snapped.
The Stork Took out a Whip to smack Baby Mario.
"WEH!WEH!" Baby Mario yelped. "WHAT WAS THAT FOR!"
"I told you to wake up...." The Stork Said to Baby Mario, as if nothing happened.
"Ok..." Baby Mario whispered to The Stork.
Baby Mario walked to the bathroom to wash his face, brush his teeth and pee in the toilet. :lol:
The Stork didn't like the smell inside the bathroom. "Why you still in your toilet? Change your clothes! You need to eat lunch now!" He shouted.

That's what GOOD story tellers would write.
Overall, 1/10 for atleast tring.


You're saying GOOD story writers would say that? I beg to differ.

Im not saying they would say that, (Cuz the woundn't) I'm saying if they DID, they would. Get it?
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