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[Silver Sonic_106]

chapter 1. welcome to Rogueport

this is my first story ever.i warn you.it will be HUGE.i hope you like it,oh and if you want to be in it just post and i will try to put you in somewhere,but enough this,on to the story. and just to clear up tings Alex-me

*yawn*-said Alex while getting ready for bed.
-another great day of posting and fun,but now it is time for some sleep.-Alex closed his eyes and fell into a deep long rest.

CRASH!
BAM!

-WHAT WAS THAT?!-Alex rushed downstairs to see that problem.He saw a giant black portal in side of the room.His computer was going mad upstairs.

What is happening?-zed was wondering because his computer was doing the same.A white flash hit him and he was teleported in a white void along with a very well known face.

-FOURINONE!?-That was the only thing he could say until he and fourinone got send inside the room with the black portal to see that Alex was getting strangled by a giant hand coming out of it.
-Hel-l-l-l-p-p-p...he tried to say
-ALEKSGOSPODINOV!-Zed tried to help him,only to get the hand stronger.
-I am sorry for this!fourinone said,and pushed all three of them into the portal.
they went trough it but it was not straight forward.
-what is this place?-asked Zed
-some kind of rip in time and space-said back Alex
-they made it to the other side and they fell in the middle of the ocean.
-now we have to swim?-said fourinone
-yep.-replayed zed

after i hour of swimming they saw land

when Alex got out of the water he kissed the ground 100 times.

they looked around,but the only things they could see were.......toads!

after they walked 8 steps they heard a goomba scream
-HEEEEEEEEEELLLLLLLLPPPPP!!!!!!!!!!!
-WHAT THE-
-HEEEEEEEELLLLLLPPPP!!!!!!
- WE HAVE TO HELP!
they rushed to see what was going on.A fat guy in a costume was wanting something from a goomba.He had some little soldiers which cross there hands to make an x
Zed rushed to help only to get knocked back.
-huh?who are you?
-i am Zed,and i am here to kick your but!
-Buh!Buh!Buh huh huh!-after that zed was knocked back once again.
-zed!-shouted fourinone
-and you?Who are you?
-i am fourinone!
-buh huh?You mean four in one?You have weird names.
-then a man with red clothes and a hammer rushed in the middle and jumped on him.
-buh!huh?It is always something.looks like i am going to give you a taste of the good ol, CRUMP-A-BOMB!


the man with red clothes used his hammer to deflect the attack and knocked him back.
-FLYING POWER!-screamed zed and wings came out of his back.
fourinone landed some punches but they did not have much effect.
Alex kicked him in the stomach,but the armor protcted the enemy
-X-nauts!ATTACK!
they ran right into the man,but could not hit Zed due to his flying power
-the man hit the enemy and took out the last of his energy.
-you got a few good shots,i will give you that.But for you that means.....it,s go time!
At that moment up to 50 x-nauts came to help the enemy
-HOLY SH*T!-screamed alex
-ATTACK!
good for our heroes,the x-nauts did not notice they got away.
-that was a close-a-one - said the man.
-where are we?
-why you are in Rogueport.
-WHAT?!- Screamed everyone

to be concluded....

yeah,i know-short

[YoshiKid54]

There is a problem with this. You gotta improve your grammar.

[Marko12]

I agree.You really SHOULD improve your grammar.

[Zunar]

Chapter 1: Welcome to Rogueport

This is my first story ever. I warn you, it will be HUGE. I hope you like it. Oh and if you want to be in it just post and i will try to put you in somewhere,but enough of this, on to the story. And just to clear up tings Alex-me

Alex yawned while getting ready for bed. "Another great day of posting and fun, but now it is time for some sleep." Alex closed his eyes and fell into a deep long rest.

CRASH!
BAM!

"WHAT WAS THAT?!" Alex said, surprised. He rushed downstairs and saw the problem. He saw a giant black portal in side of the room and his computer was going mad upstairs.

"What is happening?" Zed wondered because his computer was doing the same. A white flash hit him and he was teleported in a white void along with a very well known face.

"FOURINONE!?" That was the only thing he could say until he and fourinone got send inside the room with the black portal to see that Alex was getting strangled by a giant hand coming out of it.
"Hel-l-l-l-p-p-p...," Alex tried to say.
"ALEKSGOSPODINOV!" Zed tried to help him, only to get the hand stronger.
"I am sorry for this!" Fourinone said, and pushed all three of them into the portal.
They went through it but it was not straight forward.
"What is this place?" asked Zed
"Some kind of rip in time and space," Alex replied.
They made it to the other side and they fell in the middle of the ocean.
"Now we have to swim?" asked Fourinone
-yep.-replied Zed

After an hour of swimming they saw land and when Alex got out of the water he kissed the ground 100 times. They looked around, but the only things they could see were.......toads!

After they walked 8 steps they heard a goomba scream
"HEEEEEEEEEELLLLLLLLPPPPP!!!!!!!!!!!"
"WHAT THE?"
"HEEEEEEEELLLLLLPPPP!!!!!!"
"WE HAVE TO HELP!"
They rushed to see what was going on. A fat guy in a costume was wanting something from a goomba. He had some little soldiers which cross their hands to make an x
Zed rushed to help, only to get knocked back.
"Huh? Who are you?" the fat guy asked.
"I am Zed,and I am here to kick your butt!" Zed replied.
"Buh! Buh! Buh huh huh!" the fat guy laughed and after that Zed was knocked back once again.
"Zed!" shouted Fourinone.
"And you? Who are you?" the fat guy asked.
"I am Fourinone!" Fourinone replied.
"Buh huh? You mean four in one? You have weird names," the fat guy said.
Then a man with red clothes and a hammer rushed in the middle and jumped on him.
"Buh! Huh? It is always something. Looks like i am going to give you a taste of the good ol, CRUMP-A-BOMB!" the fat guy said.


The man with red clothes used his hammer to deflect the attack and knocked him back.
"FLYING POWER!" screamed Zed and wings came out of his back.
Fourinone landed some punches but they did not have much effect.
Alex kicked him in the stomach, but the armor protcted the enemy.
"X-Nauts! ATTACK!" the fat guy said.
They ran right into the red man, but could not hit Zed due to his flying power.
The man hit the enemy and took out the last of his energy.
"You got a few good shots, I will give you that. But for you that means.....it's go time!" the fat guy said.
At that moment 50 X-Nauts came to help the enemy.
"HOLY SH*T!" screamed Alex.
"ATTACK!" the fat guy shouted.
Good for our heroes, the X-Nauts did not notice they got away.
"That was a close-a-one" said the man.
"Where are we?" Alex asked.
"Why, you are in Rogueport," the man answered.
"WHAT?!" screamed everyone.

To be concluded....

Yeah,i know-short

There, now it's MUCH better. Use proper capitalization and punctuation. If you have problems with that, then PM me your future chapters and I will edit them and send them back to you. Then, you can post them or I will post them.

[Silver Sonic_106]

the thing is i do not know how to put the uppercase ,, so yeah...

edit-thanks. and now i can put those ",s

anyway here:
Chapter 2: The Thousand-Year Door.
I was bored so I made another chapter

"So you are saying we are not on Earth anymore?" asked Fourinone.
"Earth?" replied the goomba, puzzled.
"Never mind. What are your names anyway?"
"I am Goombella. Nice to meet you."
"And I'm-a-Mario," said the red guy.
"Mario? You mean the hero of the mushroom kingdom? Rad!" said Goombella.
"Wow! Mario in person?" asked Zed

"Hey, why did you come here in first place?" asked Fourinone.
"Princess Peach send-a-me this map," Mario answered, pulling out a map from his pocket.
"Map?" asked Alex.
"Let me see it!" said Goombella excitedly.
"WOW! It is a map to the crystal stars!" Goomba said after a few seconds of examining it.
"Crystal Stars?" asked Zed, puzzled.
"Yes, I have been researching them and that is why I am here!" replied Goombella.
"Where are the-a-crystal stars?" asked Mario.
"I don't know, but maybe my professor does!" Goombella replied.
"And where is he?" asked Zed.
"His house is right over there," Goombella said. "Follow me!"

Once they went inside, it was like they went into library.
"Whoa...," said Alex, shocked.
"Quite a collection, is it not?" said another goomba, but this one was male, older and was wearing weird glasses.
"Professor Frankly, we need your help!" said Goombella.
"For what, may i ask?" replied Professor Frankly.
"We need you to translate this map!"
"Let me see....oh....OOOOH.....why this is a map to the crystal stars! Where did you get it?!" asked Frankly.
"Princess-a-Peach send me it" said Mario.
"Princess Peach? Oh the one from the Mushroom Kingdom! Well i have heard that the map will tell us where the crystal stars are!" Frankly responded.
"Then let's go!" said Zed, excited.

They walked through town and saw a pipe

"YOU WANT US TO GO DOWN A PIPE!?" asked Fourinone, surprised.
"Well yes,this is the only transport to get there," Frankly replied.
"Fine," agreed Fourinone, but he still wasn't happy about it.

They went down the pipe and started walking. They were walking and they saw three goombas.The first one was normal, the second had wings (Paragoomba) and the third one with a spike on his head (Spiked Goomba).They saw Goombella.

"Hey baby, you wanna go out tonight?" asked the Paragoomba.
"EW! GET AWAY FROM ME!" replied Goombella.
A battle started.

the Spiked Goomba attacked and did more damage than a regular Goomba.
"OW!" yelled Fourinone
"STAR POWER!" screamed Zed, using his power to knock out the winged goomba
Mario used his hammer to hit the spiked one, but did not knock it out.
Alex kicked it to finish it off.
the Goomba attacked Fourinone, hoping to knock him out, but did not.
Mario jumped on the goomba and defeated it.

They got to the Thousand-Year Door and Mario held up the map. Lights started lighting up and the map started to float in the air and it was covered in a magical force. And so the first stop was marked.

Chapter 3: Blooper

The group went back to professor Frankly's house to tell him what happened.
"So professor,what was all that?" asked Gombella, after she explained what had happened at the Thousand-Year Door.
"I think that you just learned a special move!" replied Frankly.
"A special move?" Goombella asked, puzzled
"Why yes, Goombella," answered the professor. "Let me show you. Your friend over there looks tired. Mario, hold up the map.

Mario did as he was told and held up the map. Sudentle papers with faces of his friends appeared. Mario also saw stars in his hand.
"Now Mario,hit the papers," said Frankly.

Mario threw a star at the picture with Fourinone.
Fourinone felt that his health got restored a little.
Mario hit a poison mushroom by mistake and was stuck in place for a few seconds.
"What was that?" asked Alex.
"Hitting a Poison Mushroom freezes you in time for a while, so be careful!" replied the professor.

When the rain of papers stopped they head out to Petalburg.

"NOT AGAIN!" screamed Fourinone, hearing that he had to go down a pipe again.
"But Four..."
"NO WAY!" Fourinone cut off Zed
But then was pulled inside by Alex.
While they were walking,they heard a cry
"BLOOOOOOPER!"
"WHAT WAS THAT?!"
Then a giant blooper jumped in front of them.
"A battle you want, eh?OK THEN!" said Goombella.

The blooper jumped on the ceiling and showed his tentacles.
"We can't attack it from there!"-said Fourinone.
Goombella headbonked one of its arms, but could not destroy them.

Mario jumped on the other one, but was unsucsessfull also.
Then he took out a fire flower and put it on the ground.The flower started letting out little fire orbs, hitting the enemy and getting him off the ceiling.
Alex rapidly punched the blooper and did some damage.
Fourinone kicked it and also helped. The blooper got up, charging at full force and knocked out Fourinone and Goombella.
Mario tried to do Sweet Treat (Special move) to heal them, but got knocked back.Then Alex used Sweet Treat and helped Mario. While he used his hammer to deflect the next attack, Goombella got up and attacked it. The blooper was getting tired, but used his last strength to pin Mario and Goombella to the ground. Alex finished it off and helped his friends up.

this one is very short,but if i tried to fit in Petalburg it will become a bit too long

credits to Zunar for fixing bad grammar.As thanks

Spoiler: show

he will be a very important character later in the story.

[Kimonio]

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