SuperSpongerific Galaxy

[Megar]

Yep. Technically, me in Super Mario Galaxy, after looking all the way on Page 7, with GM making a story about him in it. Well, this is me in number 2. So I start nao.

Prologue
"Yawn" I said. "I'm tired. I'm gonna go to bed." I went off and drifted to sleep.
The next morining...
"Jackhammers Up!" I yelled as I woke up.
"Keep it down in there! It's the Star Festival!" someone said.
"Eh? Star Festival?" I thought. "Oh god. Please don't tell me i'm in Mario Galaxy 2." I went outside. "Well, I am. Best go to the castle then. After all, me wants some cake before Mario."
"You aint-a getting a cake!" Someone then said. I turned around. It was Mario!
"Oh, it's on!" I said.

Course: Mushroom Kingdom
*Star Select!* Cursor: Mario Race; GO!
"Eat this!" I shouted as I jumped on him for a headstart. But the plumber had other tricks. He dashed right past me, but I flipped over and went into a pipe, launched out putting him down. I then noticed Mario stopped. "What's up?" I asked him.
"There's a Luma here. Hang on." He said. He put the Luma in his cap, then noticed I was gone. STAR GET!

"Is that a Giant Bowser over there?!" I asked myself.
"Yes it is! Lets-a go!" Mario shouted catching up to me.
"Let's do this!" I said as we ran off to Bowser.

[Zunar]

Nice start. But it needs to be longer. For now... 6/10

[Megar]

Nice start. But it needs to be longer. For now... 6/10

Eh, The chapters will be longer, since it's only a prologue.

[Zed98]

Nice prologue SS.

Pretty good! The prologue isn't very long, but it makes sense!

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