Runouw's Forum - "R's Army" Arc: Chapters 2-4

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Re: Runouw's Forum - "R's Army" Arc: Chapters 2-4

Postby brandoprojectm » November 20th, 2009, 11:28 am

I'll try not to take a full month for Chapter 4, but don't expect it this week. Maybe next.
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Re: Runouw's Forum - "R's Army" Arc: Chapters 2-4

Postby zebtrestalala » November 26th, 2009, 7:57 pm

Wow, great story. I like how you're striking out against the hackers throughout the story. Who doesn't hate hackers and spammers? It almost makes me wish I was more active on the forums so that I could actually warrant being a part of this.

Your story kind of seems like an anime, with all the good parts and none of the uneccessary flashbacks or episode-long charge up times. It has a very good feel to it. Keep it up!
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Re: Runouw's Forum - "R's Army" Arc: Chapters 2-4

Postby brandoprojectm » November 26th, 2009, 11:01 pm

zebtrestalala wrote:Wow, great story. I like how you're striking out against the hackers throughout the story. Who doesn't hate hackers and spammers? It almost makes me wish I was more active on the forums so that I could actually warrant being a part of this.

Your story kind of seems like an anime, with all the good parts and none of the uneccessary flashbacks or episode-long charge up times. It has a very good feel to it. Keep it up!


Thanks! I always appreciate compliments.

I'm actually thinking of including more people, and taking out people like Eliwood from the story that I don't know at all.....I dunno. I'll let you guys know if a spot opens up.

I've always meant for the story to be anime-like, and I'm actually inspired by many of my favorite mangas. The way I describe the fights comes from Rurouni Kenshin, the way of yelling out spells and the evil guys being too over-confident comes from Zatch Bell, the concept of alchemy and really powerful superiors comes from Fullmetal Alchemist, the good guys turning out to be more than competent in fighting after not revealing anything comes from Buso Renkin, the astronomical difference in power between bad guys and good guys comes from Dragonball Z etc.

Yeah, me likes the manga. *continues reading Chapter 235 of Zatch Bell*
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Re: Runouw's Forum - "R's Army" Arc: Chapters 2-4

Postby zebtrestalala » November 29th, 2009, 4:07 pm

I don't know. At some point I lose interest in anime and manga. The less localized anime especially. I just like other shows, more comedy really. More American, I guess. At some point all anime and manga seems too drawn out, and like it's just repeating itself to me, but maybe I've just watched all the wrong stuff. Anyway...I liked DBZ as a kid, even though that was a lot of the same stuff.
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Re: Runouw's Forum - "R's Army" Arc: Chapters 2-4

Postby Chaukai » November 29th, 2009, 4:12 pm

I know what you mean zeb. I used to be a big fan of Anime, but that was before anybody else even KNEW what anime was. By the time they were freaking out about Inuyasha, it was old news to me. The problem with most anime series is that its just so intensely LONG! Like... Naruto. I was a big fan. Then I put it off for a few months. I come back, they are over chapter 200. WTF. That's why whenever I watch/read an anime/manga, it can't be too long, or else I know that I'll lose interest. A good 20-40 episode anime is excellent. Maybe a 10 manga series. I did read X-Day once, which was only 2 Manga books, and let me tell you it was pretty darn interesting. Umm.. What else... Tsukihime was like, 12 episodes long. Death Note was like, 12 Mangas long. If you add an OAV to the series, then its TOO LONG.
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Re: Runouw's Forum - "R's Army" Arc: Chapters 2-4

Postby Ridder » November 29th, 2009, 7:12 pm

[Rant-ish Thing]
Usually, the Smaller the Anime/Manga, the better it is, I find myself bored with those "Over 200" Animes/Mangas, and for some reason, more intrigued with the "26 episodes,13 episodes" Animes or "a few books" Mangas.


But one day, you just outgrow Anime. That's when you REALLY start your life.
It's because You're either getting too old for this ♥♥♥♥ or the Stuff you're reading/watching is getting to darn cheesy and shallow.

And I think it's the latter.
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Other than that, I am still kind of interested in Runouw Forum Story.
Keep up the good work, as long as it comes within two more weeks, I won't forget about this.
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Re: Runouw's Forum - "R's Army" Arc: Chapters 2-4

Postby Zed98 » November 30th, 2009, 12:06 pm

I love it! Your a great story maker brandobrawl!
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Re: Runouw's Forum - "R's Army" Arc: Chapters 2-4

Postby brandoprojectm » December 7th, 2009, 11:47 am

So, I've been sick recently, and that's why I haven't been around. I'm feeling better nao, fret not.

Now, I've got some news that'll make you scream like a little girl.

CHAPTER 4 WILL BE A DOUBLE FEATURE!!

In other words, CHAPTER 5 WILL BE RELEASED WITH IT!!!

As soon as you stop screaming, I can tell you that you can expect them by Wednesday. See ya. ; )
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Re: Runouw's Forum - "R's Army" Arc: Chapters 2-4

Postby brandoprojectm » December 14th, 2009, 11:52 am

CHAPTER 4 IS OUT!!

Chapter 5 will be release later today, I think. : D
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Re: Runouw's Forum - "R's Army" Arc: Chapters 2-4

Postby MessengerOfDreams » December 14th, 2009, 11:58 am

Who was that at the end of chapter 4 crying out "NO!!!!!!"
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