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MKSTAR26 wrote:Now I want a long chapter. A long long LONG, novel-style chapter.

Challenge accepted. I shall make Chapters 29 and 30 long, and complete the story.

WHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO--

BILLY MAYS HERE BRINGING YOU A BRAND NEW PRODUCT

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YES. I CAN'T WAIT FOR CHAPTER 29.

THEZUNAR123 HERE BRINGING YOU A BRAND NEW CHAPTER

Chapter 29 is complete! How's that for a long, novel-style chapter, MK?

Epilogue coming soon...

Over already? Man...

I wanted more action.

I'm an 11-year-old. Just sayin'.

Apart from that, YEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH

MKSTAR26 wrote:I'm an 11-year-old. Just sayin'.

Whoops. My bad. Fixed.

Two things left to do with this story:
1. Write the Epilogue.
2. Re-format the entire story into the format of the last few chapters.

DE MOTHERF*CKING DESCRIPTION PLEASE. IT'S BORING WITHOUT IT.

Also you have some verb tensile confusion... please don't go: "He jumps for joy. HIs eyes then fell upon his friends, etc."

Keep it all one tense. EIther present or past.

IMPORTANT ANNOUNCEMENT!

Originally I had planned for only thirty chapters (not including the prologue and epilogue), but TMO, being the crafty SOB he is (lol, jk TMO), he got me motivated to further the story farther than I originally planned by providing ideas for Chapter 30.

Speaking of Chapter 30, it is done. However, I could not think of a name for the chapter, so I sent it to TMO. He'll get to read it before all you peoples. *is mobbed*

EDIT: Thanks for the chapter name idea, TMO! Chapter 30 is posted!

*moonwalks in, with a troll face on* =D I read it before you all, suxorz! =p
And your welcome guys. Thanks teh me, derrzzz more to read.
*pow's everyone with handguns*