The Return of the Legendary Twelve

[MICrophone]

Thanks for the praise and constructive criticisms guys! Er…yeah…I don't think I'm going to edit it again, but I will keep this in mind for future endeavors.

EDIT:

ANNOUNCEMENT

I am going to write a sequel entitled the Legendary Twelve Reunited. You can see the link here: viewtopic.php?f=27&t=1806

[MessengerOfDreams]

Did you, like, get writing lessons fom BroandoBrawl? You may have trumped him! 11/10

[MICrophone]

No, actually…and to be fair, brandobrawl crafts his stories much better than I do. In terms of the creation of plots, I don't know, but in terms of the actual writing he is better. But that is just my opinion.

But thanks for the compliment!

[Ayrayen]

No, actually…and to be fair, brandobrawl crafts his stories much better than I do. In terms of the creation of plots, I don't know, but in terms of the actual writing he is better. But that is just my opinion.

But thanks for the compliment!

actually i enjoy how you write the stories

Its very unique !

[MICrophone]

Oh, crap.

OK, so you're probably wondering why Ayrayen just bumped this story, right? The reason is that he didn't. A few of us just discovered a new (I think) bump feature (I'm not going into details for fear of abuse) and I was testing it out. It makes the last person's post become dated today. Ayrayen actually posted that in December, but because I "bumped" it it shot up to today. Unfortunately, I didn't realize this couldn't be undone, so I just unnecessarily bumped a long-dead story. So yeah. My bad. Just let this die again, I suppose.